AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Once Bitten, Twice Shy

by LadyBlueEyes

schedule September 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved it all, except for him calling her "baby," I felt like for some reason, that was out of character for him? I don't know why, but it somehow sounds strange, coming from his lips?! Other than that, cheers!!!;-)
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person kazfeist
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story, with a lovely ending! :D
person risotto
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a nice, short sweet fic. :)
person luvhp
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was beautiful. I love fics where Ron's a git and Draco sweeps Hermione off her feet. Good job, well done and very, very *deep breath* satisfying! XD
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great Darlin! I love reading your stuff, your Draco is always so sexy =P. I see you slipped in turgid , one of the many names we went through last night LMAO. Loved Blaise aswell, theres nothing like a bit of Zabini in the morning! Or Lucius...Or Snape...Or Harry...Or Cedric...*Goes off into a day dream about the HP men* LOL

xx

schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adorable...I seriously dislike Ron as a romantic lead...he just doesnt do it for me....Im a slytherin gal all the way. I love Draco...sweet, tender with just a hint of the ruthlessness that made him such a great nemesis. Ron is a prick...an idiot prick at that.


Great job darlin!

Hugs~
SG
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I send thoughts of love and healing to your daughter with my prayers that all goes well for her and my prayers of comfort to you as you sit by her side and I look forward to hearing that all has gone well.

Loved the story, it was sweet, sensitive and loving with a good peppering of sex thrown in. Wonderful stuff. :)