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for War Games

by cathiemac

person vannilla
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha
omg i cant wait to see more
do update quickly!!!!!
the war games,the transportation the raunchy sex
i cant wait!!!!
yay!!!
lol
person Harboe
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... not bad!

I especially like the first chapter, how you work original characters seamlessly into the world without breaking canon.



I'll keep reading, even if I think the second chapter was a bit early to throw in a sexual scene, though ones milage may vary.
person windbell
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Try to understand but not much info was come out so I will wait for more.
From Harry's last sentence Ron was dating Draco in secret, wasnt he?

Hmm look like Harry will be with the girl. However as long as he's happy, I'm fine with everything.