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for Unleash The Beast

by JayDee

person Anonymous
schedule May 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM

The story is just a reskin of a Choose Your Own Change thread, specifically down the Transform or Dare section. Didnt even change the dog's name.

person cherokee
schedule July 26, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Just read your story. Damn, you are that rare kind of writer that makes the reader wish the story never ends. I got off like a sonofabitch. Thank you and I hope to see more of your stories

person cat
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow *fans self*
Nice story! I've been looking for more fics like this, but haven't had much luck. Know of any?
person txdville
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. Sequal: Perhaps Sirius, back from the veil, in his animagus form. 0.o
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sequel: she gets bred by Greyback while he's in wolf form
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! And well written too! I just wish you would write a sequel :)
person korrd
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see more of this. Possibly with her continuing on with her "mating" at Hogwarts and other locations.
person OdinMage
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was hot.... more of this would be great. Hermione fantasized, while it was happening, about other beasts? Let's hear it!
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
would really like to see more of this, maybe with more witches and animals?
person dracosdemon
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant...Great visual description and PLENTY of action throughout. Nice how you kept putting the reader into Hermione's mind, allowing them to vividly access her emotions/sensations. Worked very well and was very entertaining.