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Absolutely lovely. I don't think anything else could better describe how this made me feel.

Absolutely amazing - I loved it

Excuse my French, but holy fucking shit... I ran out of stuff to read in the recently updated pages, so I went further back and found this. My reaction to the summary was "sure, why not?" But when I got to reading you got me hooked! Please tell me you edited this with original names and sent it to an editor? Because this is of the same quality as published works. Going to go check if you have any other fics posted now 😉

Wow that was a really beautiful story!! I could not stop reading it. Thank you for writing it :)

INDESCRIBABLE. THIS STORY WAS PURE BRILLIANCE. IM USING CAPS TO SHOW MY PASSION, BY THE WAY. YOU ARE AN ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC WRITER AND I DON'T FEEL LIKE THINKING OF BIG WORDS TO DESCRIBE--which i have already stated is impossible--THE MAGNIFICENCE OF THIS STORY AND YOUR WRITING STYLE.

BRAVA. BRAVA.

that was a really well written rollercoaster ride. Once I started I didn't want to stop. I got to about chapter 6 and forced myself to stop because on the profile of the story it didn't say it was complete. I didn't wish to be left hanging on a cliff-hanger so I stopped. But the story stayed in my mind. I ended up at your home page and found that it was in fact complete. That made me very happy indeed and then I proceeded to read the rest of the story. It was great. There was only one element that concerned me though. That last bit about church and state being joined. That's bad because history shows that whenever that happened persecutions followed. Every one should be entitled to believe and worship whoever and however they please as long as it is not directly harmful to others without their consent. If people wanna offer themselves as human sacrifices to some deity. That's their business. The only time one should step in is if someone is offered or killed without their consent.
I personally don't follow that kind of religion but I would be most upset that I could be sent to jail simply for having different religious views to the ruling body of my place of residence. It would be unfair to you too. Live and let live that's what I believe.

Just to let you know, I absolutely adore this story :)

I generally stay away from non-magical AUs but am really glad I took a chance with this one.

Really enjoyed!

Great detail in the world building and interesting plotline.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

wow. it took some serious finagling but he finally got his Harry in the end. I thought i would have preferred to see pansy meet a cruel fate but having her stripped of everything and broken was even better. ^^
well done.

eeee, i had honestly kind of forgotten about this story, or at least i think assumed it had ended cause i have thought about it after reading it last. i loved teh ending, and you played the time jumps well and managed to wrap everything up so perfectly and give a happy ending. awesome story, teh work and thought you put into all the little details and plot and the whole other world that you created and managed to work in the existing characters adn their attitudes adn still keep them true to their characters while putting them in new places, simply amazing work. sad to see it's over, but want you to know i think you did a spectacular job with this entire piece. great work :D