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by neelix

person Angie30
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far neelix. Once again you are turning out a very good story.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear neelix,
It is my opinion that there should be a warning posted when reviewers spell every third word wrong. Can you arrange that for me?

LOL. I probably just pissed someone off; not the first time... tonight. So your name comes from the little kitchen guy in Star Trek? He's SOOO cute.

Now, about the story. (yes, about the story.) No burn like a slow burn, girl! It'll be worth the wait when it all comes together (haha, get it? Comes together...). Sheesh, I crack myself up.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Severus bored with sex. Geez, what is the world coming to? Lulu cracked me up, by the way. I can already tell this is going to be fantastic.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this! I love the plot and your writing is excellent!
I look forward to the next update!!!
person Muffy
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new story. Great start, seems like this will be a fun one. I look forward to reading more as you have time. Also, no clue on who Val is supposed to be.