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by neelix

schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this storyline is great, and can relate too some people. I love how you added the attributes of both Hermione and Snape, and carried on as if life was normal after the downfall of Voldemort.
Hope to see some more soon. =D
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, such a wonderful kiss. Poor darling aren't getting any yet....

It's interesting to see how chaste!Hermione will react to her soulmate. Sevvie can always say he lurves her and get it...that would be devious and slytherin.... but i guess he's a good boy...

I want to read more again!
person Muffy
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had something beautiful and intelligent to say. It's a flaw. Thanks for the update!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao this is great! i love the idea
person KellyJCR
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow how are these two going to come together. This is different for you, usually they are attracted instanly and nsture takes its course. Severus is extremely garded in this one and they have been co-workers for a few years. I am not sure what you are going to do to get these two together. From what I gather your muse makes it up as she goes along so I know its pointless to ask the million questions I have bouncing in my head. . That being said well done!! I do enjoy your stories way to much.
person Angie30
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He is so adorable when he apologises. *Sighs*
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That, my friend, was an EXCELLENT chapter. It was sad, it was happy... it was awesome!!
person Prospera
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I can't wait for the rest of it. Thank you!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely updates, I really like this story!!!
person amsev
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a fun (if argumentative) beginning. Heh, wait till the couple in question finds out!