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by neelix

schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ... please please update soon .. later for now

angel
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*stops sobbing long enough to write a review*

Oh neelix, this was...wonderful. And i sincerely hope you will come back to this topic again, since it shows such a sweet vulnerable site of Severus and it makes me want to hug and kiss him to make him feel better. *sighs*
Wonderful job as usually!

Thank you !!!!

Love
Jocy
person Muffy
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was almost strange to read him crying, but it was necessary and made sense. There is a real healing going on and you are doing it justice. Thanks for the update!
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, this is good so far, i really like it,can you please post more soon, and lots more at that..keep up the good work
person neelix
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback everyone.

I wasn't infering that Romany blood means people are seers... it was more in relation to the firtune cards Valentine used. The Seer thing is seperate but perhaps I didn't make it that clear... Minerva is a Seer in my fic, but she is NOT Romany... just to clarify!


will update soon, bear with me!
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I have Rromani blood, and my family's marriages were arranged. No soul mating hocus-pocus there.
person Muffy
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Enjoying the story, thanks for the update!
person KellyJCR
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this one. I like that you didn't have them jump right into bed. I know they have had some "fun" in bed but have yet to go all the way. (Lord help us all I'm starting to sound like a teenager.) I really am enjoying the build up to the intamacy of the relationship. Great job!!! Looking forward to an update.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally Can again so YES of course im gonna review.

Once again i find your story so extremely charming and well written.
I hang onto every word and they both seem so...Real. With edges and everything.

Thank you neelix for another wonderful wonderful story and i sincerely hope you NEVER EVER tire of this pair.

Love Jocy
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.