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by neelix

person KellyJCR
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely perfect. You did that chapter justice. I loved how you made Severus so demanding yet there was an underlying tenderness about him. Great Chapter, loved it. Can't wait for more.
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this fic, its sooo feel good without being too falsely sweet. Even soul mates get it wrong sometimes as I well know!!

Keep up the good work dearie!!
xx
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
..........oh.....my.......*whew*......* happy dance*......
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
neelix- i love this fic. all of your fics, in fact. please udate soon...
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Angie30
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Girl but that was a hot scene!
person Muffy
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Romantic but not mushy, just lovely. Thanks for the update.
person Muffy
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Squee!

Thanks for the updates. Bless!
person Larrabee
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I love how hapy and light-hearted the moment was for Severus to proclaim his love. A joyous occasion indeed.

Love this story.