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by neelix

person smmz79
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a fabulous story... i love the transition severus made once he was loved and realized that he deserved it how very sweet...
person Moyra
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks a lot for this wonderful light-hearted fluffy story with the erotic lemons. I've enjoyed it very very much.
person mlui
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very fluffy and cute. Great job! =)
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was an awesome story! I loved it! Keep up the great writing!

Tiffany
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing! I loved it!!! ^^
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely amazing story. Bravo!!
person Angie30
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Severus does have the best ideas!
person Muffy
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I love a happy ending with children too! Bless!
person ilke
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah! That was the end? That totally snuck up on me. it was great! I like the words you chose to have him ask her to marry him. This was an excellent and thorougly enjoyable story! Lovely! Lovely! Great job!
person KellyJCR
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so sweet!