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for Teach Me Something

by mrsthedke

person Ithilwen
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story!!!

So hot and it was go funny when he revealed he heard everything she thought in the first chapter LOL.

I wonder if it's not Kingsley that came bursting into the room. Or maybe her BF.
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Oh dear, it looks as though Hermione has underestimated her opponent. But being tied up by Lucius Malfoy can
person CoCoM
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, who is bursting in on them?! If it is Ron that would be too freaking hilarious!
Anyway, great smut! I think you could have a definite talent for it, please keep it up! ;-P
I quite like rough and naughty Lucius, so enjoyed his aggressive behaviour here. I am hoping to see more along this vein in the future.
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet update, Darling! I was wondering if you would get back to it, but I know life has a way of taking over and the fun things get pushed to the side...fun things like thinking up delicious Lucius smut. =) and really, what could be more fun than daydreaming about rowdy romps with the beautiful blond?


Happy writing!
SG
person CoCoM
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! That last line was too perfect! BTW, I could totally imagine all of those things with Lucius Malfoy as well....*fans self*
Great chapter!
person CoCoM
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was just E-Vil! A part of me suspected that it would all turn out to be a dream (with her not remembering her alarm going off, how she got to work,etc) but I was hoping not. Now, I trust that you will not let us down and we can have a "real" encounter between the two of them.....right????
person CoCoM
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay A)What I wouldn't give to experience Lucius's left ring finger in action! LOL! That was great. And B) Please update ASAP as I am dying to know what happens now that Hermione is "trapped" by Lucius. Oh the possibilities....hehe. Oh and C)Ron is a total loser.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...well first let me say thank you for the shout out! And second...let me say that I am now obsessed with what Lucius is capable of doing to a body with his left ring finger....I will sacrifice myself for the curiosity of others and be the poor guinea pig for a demonstration. hehe


Again...another person who shares my belief in Lucius's oral abilities....I imagine he would be incredible.



Ron sex makes me shudder LMAO but Harry sex is worse


I love it, I will be watching for updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Happy Writing!!!

~SG~
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: I thank you for the lovely compliments.

Your Hermione is different, but who can say if she
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2: Well, this is a refreshingly different Hermione. Her mind runs nonstop over every salacious detail that one could possibly imagine when faced with Mr. Lucius Malfoy in the flesh (so to speak). It is so very funny 'listening' to her stream of consciousness as she basically overwhelms poor Lucius with her lusty thoughts.

The dream sequence was amazing, sexy, and nicely decorated. I especially liked the slightly writhing serpents on the headboard. You give enough detail to set the scene without drowning us in it. If Lucius is privy to all the ramblings of Hermione's mind, I can't imagine how he is going to keep from helping himself to Mudblood 'pie'.

This is a very cute story with a vastly entertaining Hermione. I almost believe that our Miss Know-It-All has a mind full of all that mile-a-minute discourse. Your Hermione is a scream! Well done!