rate_review Reviews

Oh! So close! You are taunting us, lovely author, but because you write so well I suppose I can forgive you. ^_^ I really liked the portrayal of Harry here, how childish and spoilt he is. I can't wait for the next installment!

Totally on the edge of my seat...with the thrilling anticipation...and POW.
Fenrir doesn't have Harry. So close too.
Loved the way Harry felt safe and found Fenrir attractive.
Can't wait to read more.

Great chapter, can't wait to read the next chapter.

More more! I can't wait for the enxt part!

love this story!!!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!

You don't deserve them? WTF? That was an amazing chapter! You got off to a shaky start with this one, but the latest chapter was great, very enjoyable to read. Harry is so damn cute! And I loved how nice the Dursleys were to him: makes a change. I think that was a good relection of what the Dursleys might of been like if they's thought a little harder about their actions. They were just a scared powerless family thrown into a huge battle that they knew nothing about, and all they knew was that they wanted the best for their son. I think the Durslyes, without Harry, would have been a wonderful, happy family. It would have been nice if they had been as loving to Harry as they were to Dudley, like we can see here. I really am looking forward to the next chapter, DON'T GIVE UP!!! :D

Yes!! another FGHP! There really are faaaaaaar too few of them:D

Cheers!

I love this story. I especially love the end of chapter 2 when Harry meet Draco for the first time. I keep reading that part over and over.

Great work.

I think this story would have been far better if you had skipped ahead after the first chapter. I really can't see where you're going with this - Harry's still a child and so this story will just end up being a long, drawn out lead up to something that can't happen until Harry's older anyway. If you had just skipped to when Harry was 13 or something for the second chapter, or maybe had a chapter of like a "flash forward" with a bunch of small but important stories that occur in the time leading up to the main plot it would have been better. To me, the real story can't begin until there's the opportunity for Fenrir to get Harry away at a time when Harry is also old enough to understand and be able to act on what's happening. I don't really care to much about the OOC Fenrir - frankly if you want to write anything of value he has to be otherwise he's just a vicious, petty, sneering dog of a thing that isn't worth the time.

Anyway. That's just what I think.

You do too deserve them! Keep going! I look forward to the next part!