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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I absolutely love it and I can't wait for the next part.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review for chapters 3 and 4
Those two meeting with Harry and Fenrir were great. Thier first meeting was so sweet and I really thought Fenrir was finally going to take Harry back with him. Now that meeting at the club was just great, it was hot and sensual. I sure do hope Fenrir can get Harry out of there. I wonder how James and the other will react
Those two meeting with Harry and Fenrir were great. Thier first meeting was so sweet and I really thought Fenrir was finally going to take Harry back with him. Now that meeting at the club was just great, it was hot and sensual. I sure do hope Fenrir can get Harry out of there. I wonder how James and the other will react
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!
I'm so excited theirs another chapter to this tale.
Wonderfully written and addicting.
I'm hooked.
The scene in the Alley begged to be longer, well I was wanting it to be longer, because I didnt want it to end.
I love reading Fenrir & Harry together.
I cant wait to read more.
I'm so excited theirs another chapter to this tale.
Wonderfully written and addicting.
I'm hooked.
The scene in the Alley begged to be longer, well I was wanting it to be longer, because I didnt want it to end.
I love reading Fenrir & Harry together.
I cant wait to read more.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ppppssss...the songs, love them.
...hugs.
It was exhilarating & enticing to read the lyrics slipped into this fic.
...hugs.
It was exhilarating & enticing to read the lyrics slipped into this fic.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story :) though, I do have one question.. Are you swedish? I mean, both Hinder and Bodies Without Organs are swedish and I don't think BWO are that big out of the country.. Oh well, it doesn't really matter. Love the story, please Update soon :)
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was certainly a birthday surprise for Harry.
Good chapter.
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Good chapter.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story.
update!
update!
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Moremoremore please. I can't wait for Lilly and James' little secretive act explode in their faces, especially after kicking Remus out like that.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was goes to leave it alone, but I suppose I'm a little annoyed with your rather gross misinterpretation of my previous review.
It was curt, I will grant you that. However, I believe that if you were taking it in the spirit it was meant, you would see to the point of the review: I was giving you some constructive criticism. As criticism, I don't believe you should be expecting flowery praise. I have given reviews that have been criticism, but still perhaps more pleasant, however I have also given plenty in the same tone. The authors have, until now, thanked me for my opinion whether they agreed or not and, if they felt they could improve, they may change; if not, they don't.
Firstly, I wasn't saying "flash forward so Harry can have sex", I was saying "flash forward because if Harry is a baby or a child he will be unable to understand relationships except the parental or friendships" - that is, he would view Fenrir as a father figure, rather than a friend or someone to have a relationship with when he was older.
Perhaps, you viewed my review was "not nice" because you felt I didn't have anything pleasant to say: this is untrue. At the end of my review, I supported an out of character Fenrir, stating that if he were in character it would be difficult for him to have any redeeming qualities - the last book ruined the fannon view of Fenrir, and broke his character down into someone who could not be seen any way other than negatively.
I was, I suppose, "curt" rather than "perhaps somewhat pleasant" because I have found myself to dislike your stories as a whole: I have yet to be able to read past 7 or 8 chapters of any of your stories. Your ideas are excellent: unique and well thought out. However, as the stories continue, major characterization flaws and a personal dislike of your writing style cause my interest to wain. This story and The Erlking are actually the best - Harry's personality is begun from scratch, and therefore I don't feel there is much character flaw because the situations he is in would cause him to be the way he is.
To make a long review short, I was mildly offended that you were offended by my review: perhaps you have not had much criticism, and consequently chose to view it as a threat to your ideas, when in fact it is merely an opinion. A criticism is perhaps more difficult to ignore than a flame, as flames are generally illogical and badly communicated, but you must understand as an author that it is entirely up to you whether you listen to the opinion given to you or not.
I leave you with some thoughts: plot is not everything. Harry Potter has the most fanfiction base of any other book - perhaps any other series at all. Why? Because J.K. Rowling's ideas are excellent, but her writing is not. Long, plot-altering stories are not written about good, well written books - because there is very little that can be made better.
I hope, at this time, that you decided to read this with an open mind.
Thank you for your time.
It was curt, I will grant you that. However, I believe that if you were taking it in the spirit it was meant, you would see to the point of the review: I was giving you some constructive criticism. As criticism, I don't believe you should be expecting flowery praise. I have given reviews that have been criticism, but still perhaps more pleasant, however I have also given plenty in the same tone. The authors have, until now, thanked me for my opinion whether they agreed or not and, if they felt they could improve, they may change; if not, they don't.
Firstly, I wasn't saying "flash forward so Harry can have sex", I was saying "flash forward because if Harry is a baby or a child he will be unable to understand relationships except the parental or friendships" - that is, he would view Fenrir as a father figure, rather than a friend or someone to have a relationship with when he was older.
Perhaps, you viewed my review was "not nice" because you felt I didn't have anything pleasant to say: this is untrue. At the end of my review, I supported an out of character Fenrir, stating that if he were in character it would be difficult for him to have any redeeming qualities - the last book ruined the fannon view of Fenrir, and broke his character down into someone who could not be seen any way other than negatively.
I was, I suppose, "curt" rather than "perhaps somewhat pleasant" because I have found myself to dislike your stories as a whole: I have yet to be able to read past 7 or 8 chapters of any of your stories. Your ideas are excellent: unique and well thought out. However, as the stories continue, major characterization flaws and a personal dislike of your writing style cause my interest to wain. This story and The Erlking are actually the best - Harry's personality is begun from scratch, and therefore I don't feel there is much character flaw because the situations he is in would cause him to be the way he is.
To make a long review short, I was mildly offended that you were offended by my review: perhaps you have not had much criticism, and consequently chose to view it as a threat to your ideas, when in fact it is merely an opinion. A criticism is perhaps more difficult to ignore than a flame, as flames are generally illogical and badly communicated, but you must understand as an author that it is entirely up to you whether you listen to the opinion given to you or not.
I leave you with some thoughts: plot is not everything. Harry Potter has the most fanfiction base of any other book - perhaps any other series at all. Why? Because J.K. Rowling's ideas are excellent, but her writing is not. Long, plot-altering stories are not written about good, well written books - because there is very little that can be made better.
I hope, at this time, that you decided to read this with an open mind.
Thank you for your time.