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I love this story. I'm eager (and terrified) to know what Lily has up her sleeve. I'm surprised Harry hasn't locked her up and al least put her in a place where she wouldn't cause trouble.
Keep going!

I haven't been reviewing, but I just wanted to drop a line and say that I love your story. Actually, it was the little thing in your final author's note saying you needed to drop out of college to update more often that had me laughing so hard I almost dropped my laptop, and my fiance thinks I've officially lost it (although he's been speculating for quite some time now...). I understand! I'm in college too, and it sucks when it take up all your time. Keep it up, you're doing great. ~dpa06~

love this story!!!!! i hope you update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!1 keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!

So many things happened in this chapter. It seems like Lily went over the deep end, well at least James changed his mind along with some others. And finally Peter is dead. I am just a bit nervous about Ginny, she might become like Bellatrix here, I just hope not.

With seeing the death of thier king and how Fenrir acts with Harry I do hope that they change their minds about werewolves and Lily

Holy Crap this is getting good! Update update update!

*cries* That was such a sad ending to that chapter! Damn Lily and her insanity. Was her madness the reason why she was able to heal and fight with an element at the same time?
Bellatrix really needs to die...
Keep going!

Cho! I love HP/FG and when i read your summery i was like whooo~ xD This is gonna be the shiz-nit! But i got up to the sixth chap and i was just a bit disappointed -__- 1. I was hoping that Fenir would get to Harry quicker and Harry wouldnt be ignorant for so long and 2. Theres a couple of holes in your fic so far. Its small but in chap 5 there was mention that Bill got both his elements from each of his parents but i could have sworn you used the Weasleys as an example of how some babys born of a non-elemental mother, sometimes wont have elemental magic... i think you used ron and percy? Also in chap 6 You said that werewolves can only procreate with there own kind, but Peter's mother was raped by a werewolf and thats how Peter came to be? I only read up to chap 6 like i said before, so idk if that was explained or not. Then it feels like everyone is OOC... ok maybe not everyone but the 2 most important people seem to be. I give you credit for making everything so not cliche which is just incredible, since everything is now-a-days but i cant explain it... i just dont feel anything for Harry and he's suppose to be the main person right? He's just a selfish, spoiled teen... and who knows whats going on with Fenir, you gave him no history. ...and i just HATE James... Lily too, though not as much xP Though that was your intention, having James as the bad guy. Anyway this isnt a flame i hope you know! I put my email down just to prove that. I actually love a few of your fics, but this one just isnt doing it for me which sucks cause i actually waited till this had at least a two digit number to start reading it >_<

Great chapter ^_^

Please update chapter 11 soon.

Jan

love the sex scene!! update soon :P

The stages of Harrys pregnancy were an interesting read, nicely done :D