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I am so angered of the situation and full of hope that Fg/Hp will be together.
And the 'truth' will be told to Hp...
So full of emotions and suspense...its killing me.
Love it all the way...
I love this pairing without a doubt and glad you started on this fic.
Again...as always, cant wait to read more.

heeey! can't wait for the next chap of erlking! but on this one, i'm immediately confused, you say that if your mother was elemental, you would be as well, the same if your father was elemental .. that means, that if your mum was E but not your father, you would be E as well, and if your father was E but not your mother, that would create the same result ... did i understand that right or not? do your parents have to be both E for you to be E as well .. if this was not the case, and i was right the first time, then what do you mean by, if the E is male and he procreated with an H female, they would both create a H child? .. unless you mean that E mothers also include males who can Mpreg?

and why did Voldie go on a rampage? you also didn't explain all that well ... if you did explain it, it wasn't all that clear .. because i've read some of your fics, and i understood them .. don't get me wrong, i love fenrirharry fics, and i'm not bashing you, i just want to make everything clear so that i have a better understanding of it and i would get the flow of the story ... anyway, back to the qeustion at hand .. how did tom grow to be voldie? was he in dumbee's care but was neglected? if he was under D's care, was he jealous that someone else was proclaimed his heir? is that it?

if any of my questions were anwered further into the story, i'm sorry, i'm reviewing as i'm reading ..

finished! it's really good!! yay, for kawaii harry!!! you make really good fics! can't wait for more of this, and more of others! keep it going!!

very very very good carry on please

Oooooh this is very interesting already. I like how arrogant Fenrir is

I am looking forward to reading more

oh i want to see what happens next. please update soon. ^_^

I look forward to the next part, keep it up, great start.

This is truly wonderful! I can't wait for the succeeding chapters!! This is exactly what I was looking for when I started surfing today, so thankyou for sharing your work with us. The only thing I would change is the description "thin". When I imagine Greyback I see a tall, very VERY muscular, broad chested, rugged man, but this guy sounds a bit weedy... is this an aspect of the story you might consider changing...? If not, I completely understand; its your work, not mine, but that would make me really happy! Good luck with writing the next chapter. xxxx