rate_review Reviews

I love the story so far. Don't be down on yourself or the story. please keep going!

Ok I just hope that what Harry and Draco have is really just a friendship since Fenrir already has problems. Damn I wonder when they will discover Peter.

i loveeee this story. fenrir/harry is a very hard pairing to find great stories, but this one seems to be so good. pleaesee update asap! =]

Oh, don't be so harsh on yourself. I think you did a good job on this chapter and it was certainly interesting. I was half expecting an abused Harry for those 20 some years, and then you went and made him treated like a normal person. Talk about something different. I actually like your Fenrir, he's nice while still being canon. I think the super-nice Fenrir's are a little weird and very unrealistic. Keep up the work, and stop being so hard on yourself. Just find yourself a nice beta and you'll be all right.

Im so frustratedly torn here.
I so pushing towards Fenrir to be with his mate...and to read... everything is tearing them away from eachother.
Ugh.
As always...I cant wait to read the next chapter.

...Im so happy you write your chapters long.

i have just find this story, cannot wait for the next chapter

Oh hush, you deserve reviews. I liked it and I liked your Fenrir.

This is a poorly written story. Though the idea is good, your orginization and grammatical skills are horrible. You should never use the term "but I'll get to that in a moment" or "as mentioned before". That is a sign of a weak writter. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, but you really must work on eliminating these lead-in's from your writing.

Poor Remus, James is really hotheaded... And I guess that Wormtail is the same rat too...
I hope that Harry won't turn into a same hotheaded person, that way he wouldn't forsake
Remus and his mate... Although the mate part I can imagine that it would take some time
until Harry actually accepts the fact. You know, if Harry's parents don't tell him about
the werewolves then what about his elemental powers?
Thanks for the chapter anyways :)! I hope to see more soon, and great job on finishing
the Erlking... at first I always read it 'erkling' and it kinda stuck on me even though
later I noticed it was erlking... :D

This is an awesome story so far. Really intriguing. I loved how you combined the canon history with your story's history.
Keep going!
update!