rate_review Reviews

Damn. I cried so hard at the end. Poor Fenrir. He has to raise the baby without his mate. I loved this story, despite my tears. It was awesome and I am so glad I read it.

....*slaps you*
Did you rewrite the ending or something? I can't remember it being like this the first time I read the story, I'd never reread it if I had remembered that it was an unhappy ending. Unfair.

I HATE YOU!!!! I just started bawling my eyes out. Harry's death is the worst possible thing that could happen. Now Fenrir is going to die as well...
Great story though. I haven't had a story make me cry in a long time, so I guess congratulations are in order

Awesome!! XD I really loved this story, though I would like to know what happened to Eva and Ferrir and Hogwarts after words. The end truly was poetaly beautful!

(E-mail me a reply at keraizaki@yahoo.com)

Well... damn. Now I remember why I never read this story, Harry dies in the end and I peaked at the end when I read 'character death' in the summary ... But it is a great story :D I really like it, except for perhaps Harry's untimely demise

Oh wow that ending was very unexpected. It has been a great read and I still love your story until now

Well I did end up with a surprise in this chapter, though it wasn't the gender of Harry's baby. Don't know if you were trying for a surprise but I knew it was going to be a girl. How? I seem to be unable to find boy children in HP stories these days. I've almost resigned myself though I'm still holding out the hope that fanfic authors might remember that boy children do exist, and that with two XY chromosomes combining they're actually more likely than girls.

The surprise was Harry dying. Was he shot with a silver bullet? Because I was under the impression that werewolves healed really quickly (what with Harry sticking his hand into the fire and pulling it out without even a mark on his skin, minus the blister). Maybe I'm overestimating, but it seems like it bullet wound shouldn't have been able to kill him? I dunno.

That ending blind-sided me.
From a writer's standpoint, that was a good tragic ending. The last couple of lines tied the whole concept of what you were trying to convey together.
From a reader's standpoint, HOW could you kill Harry???! Just when he got everything that he wanted! He finally gave birth to a beautiful baby girl, he and Fenrir were together, and then you killed him! FUCK!!! I really HATE unhappy endings. With a passion. And I really like Fenrir/Harry stories and this was one of my favorites but then, you killed Harry! ARGH!!!!!!
I understand you like unhappy endings but DAMN! That was so uncool! **grumbles, grumbles**

On another note, I hope your hand feels better and thank you for finishing this story despite your hand injury!

PS Don't take my review hard. I'm not bashing your story, I just wanted Harry to have a long, happy life with Fenrir and have lots of babies! *tears*
PPS Since you made Lambs have an unhappy ending, PLEASE don't make Butterfly have an unhappy ending!!! Please!!!

Ooooh! Interesting. Is it just me, or has Lily gone a little... Potty? Aw, I know it's bad, but I couldn't resist. :P I liked this chapter a lot. The story seems to be building up to a climax; I wonder what's going to happen next?

~Kati-chan

Okay I know this is a late question and completely unrelated to the current chapters, but:What exactly is it that is between Severus and Luscius(spelled wrong)? I think you mentioned in an early chapter that they lived in the same house, though I could be wrong. Are they just close friends? They seem to be everywhere together. Don't mind me, I'm an absurd SS/LM fan. So I randomly jumped to conclusions.

I love the story by the way. Well written and well thought out!