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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hay don't leave it there up date soon please
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o le gasp this is good.
and interesting....please write more
and interesting....please write more
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A few words for you.....grammar, spelling, composition and punctuation. You need a BETA, especially if English is not your native language. Plus the first 4 chapters really need to be one or two chapters. However the plot/story line is a good one.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion I love what you have so far and I looking forward to the next part!!!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was good can't wait to see what happens how rem and sir just gave harry up are did dumbly take him from them i also like that he has the founders blood him please update soon longer
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story and i like how its going..... it has flaws. I'm meaning this to be constructive. I really am. First of all you need a beta. Not a bad thing. i think all writers should use a beta. Hell I use a beta.... If I didn't I'm sure I would have people hunting me down. second please add a little more descriptions. I know some peoples writing styles just aren't like that however it helps draw out the length of chapters and as a result the story.
Please don't get discouraged i really do like this story. please let me know if you are having trouble finding a beta. you can contact me at (kitsune_spyk@yahoo.com). good luck with the rest of the story i look forward to reading it.
Please don't get discouraged i really do like this story. please let me know if you are having trouble finding a beta. you can contact me at (kitsune_spyk@yahoo.com). good luck with the rest of the story i look forward to reading it.