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I only made it halfway through the first chapter so far. Entertaining premise and banter, but a couple of nitpicks--the Minister is referred to as he, but also comments remembering when he was a blushing bride. Also, Hermione mentally refers to Draco as her boyfriend, but Draco refers to themselves mentally as fuck buddies. I'm not sure if that's a glitch or that's how they view themselves. Faithfulness didn't seem to be a condition of their relationship before though.

Perhaps this is cleared up later, but Hermione taking on a partner would imply that she and Draco have a private law firm, hired by the Ministry for this case. But the Minister seems to be a boss more than an important client?

I'm enjoying the characterization with Draco, selfish to the core, but not inherently evil. I like when he attempted to hide and let Hermione face the music alone. The Boy Who Got Away With Everything indeed. I also like that there's still a big line between the Ministry and the War Veterans, and there are different behavior expectations for Purebloods and Muggleborns.

I love both of your broomsticks stories their AMAZING!!! Also, Draco and Hermione have to stay married I don't want them to split up their so cute together. Please update ASAP!!!!!!

great chapter!! this is such a great story
keep up the great work can't wait for your next update

Looking forward to the next chapter!

oh omg please more!!!

hey there,
i love your work!
broomsticks and bondage was great and now this second edition is just as good =)
please continue with it!!

Great job keep it up!