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for Broomsticks and Alibis

by TempestLore

person smmz79
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaahhhhhh i guessed right sorta.... ok so i never thought of millicent, very sneaky, but all the signs were there now that i think of it she was trying to point the finger at blaise and they were all of his girlfriends... i can not believe you had hermione turn into the cat that was funny and very very clever i like that you did a great job with this smut/mystery.. i hope you do some more like this it was very entertaining... oh and i can not wait for your next story i know you have to shake things up for draco and hermione but i hope that you keep their relationship strong because i really like how you have written them alond with your other stories i am in the middle of dark fire that is nice too i love scorpian kiss... anyways great job i am kind of sad to to see the end of this one it has been great but i look forward to where you will take draco and hermione....
person Tori in Wonderland
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!

I can't wait for the next one.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic ending ^_^. I had a feeling it was that person but i wasn't really sure. None the less fantastic story and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Finally! In the end! i never thought that Minister himself involved in that horrible case too! i pitied Blaise that he almost went to Azkaban from what his wife did!

Great Job! Well Done!

can't wait for next Broomstick series :D
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what an awesome ending!!!! this story was brilliant!!!
you did a WONDERFUL job!!
person Tori in Wonderland
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories please update I can't wait until Draco gets his memory back and we find out who the real killer is.
person smmz79
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHH no it is not blaise oh my god i can not believe it you are going to kill me what an awesome chapter.... ok so what do we know it is two people obviously hmm... i bet it is the minister and ron... that is my guess or the minister and krumm but i am leaning towards ron... i was thinking about this story last night bc i could not sleep and something screamed that the minister was in on it... just by the way he reacted at the speech and esp the way he was firing all the women and his treatment of the war veterns.... anyway excellent chap please update soon....
person smmz79
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaahhhh that was awesome.... i love the funhouse you did a great job writing that and i can only imagine what harry and ginny saw...... i love how draco and hermione worked through their past hurt for each other..... ohhh i wonder what is happening in the forest.... please update soon......
person smmz79
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wooo hooo i love that chap... and whata surprising turn of events draco going for the ministers position... i can not believe he fired hermione... well i hope they find the killer.... update soon this is getting really good
person xD
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the fight scene. Really intense and creative. I'd be interested in learning more about what would happen if they didn't stop what was going on. As for the chapter before, it seems like all fingers point to Blaise.. but I have this feeling that it could be Bulstrode.

Thanks much for the quick updates! :]