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by TempestLore

schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15

Yes I am back, and of course you know, I have already finished this and loved it, but I want to give you a chapter by chapter review. Sorry it
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Yay! I
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13

Aw, I wanted to see the bomb go off. LOL!

So Hermione took Viktor to meet his parents. That was rather touching. Now I feel bad for thinking Viktor is the murder. So who is the murderer? Harry? LOL

Anyway, that was cute at the end where Draco sneaks into Hermione
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

Okay, so now Neville is a suspect too. You know I am horrible about figuring out mysteries, so I am going to quit guessing. LOL

Bloody numbers confuse me? Oh, you will have to do better then that my sexy Dragon. You
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

So Draco just had to go slip into Hermione
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10

So Draco is now working as a double agent! I love it!

And as always, I just love the way you write him. His dialog is so funny!
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9

Oooo it looks like the plot is thickening! You have quite a little mystery here and I am wondering what Draco and Harry have planned at the Quidditch match. So is Viktor still trying to move in on Hermione? It doesn
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8

Oh my, lovely smut chapter! :D
As always I love the free and easy banter back and forth between Draco and Hermione. Then there was the lovely shower sex. When Draco shows his dominance, it just makes my heart go flippy-flop. And I really loved what he told her at the end. That was so beautiful, I just swooned! LOL

schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

Well I am glad to see Harry is giving Draco more of a chance. That was cool too, the way Ginny was defending them. Your dialog always cracks me up. LOL

I had to laugh when Draco got jealous of Victor. You always write him so funny and sure of himself. Yet there is always that soft insecure side underneath. Perfect! :D

So whoever is the murderer, flew off on a firebolt and they are not very good flyers either since they hit the window ledge. Mmmm
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6


Good grief! Well Lucius wasn