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for Bei Mir Bist Du Schon

by TenderQuaintWitch

schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person neelix
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waiting patiently for the promised lemons... I love this story, Severus is very reserved and real... love it!
person crinna
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it might be the title. that and in the summary you have to stop and explain that the fic is in english. i find with other stories that an exciting summary goes a long way. also it just might be a slow period for readers. there is a lot going on in the real world that can interfere with free reading time.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! The reason I didn't read it before was because I didn't realize it was actually in english (I could of just used my brain and took a peak anyway, but, thats me for you). I can hardly wait to read he end. If you have time, you should add another chapter to " A sad and happy story"; that one made me laugh so hard I almost snorted ice tea out my nose :D
person neelix
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice first snogging session.... Severus is lovely, isn't he??

Write faster woman....

LMAO!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Response to Chapter 6 - possibly. Many titles that are in a foreign language are usually written in that language. You might alter the summary to reflect the translation of the title and mention it is written in english.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot understand why there is not much interest in this fic, I love it and check daily for updates. Please do not give up on this.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my guess would be lurkers, im lazy and dont comment on it

but i do like it =)

keep up the good work =)

schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad you like it! All the songs are really great. I should add links to where the lyrics may be found. A project for later. Yes, Neelix, all my fics come with a kleenex advisory--I own stock. (By the way, I've been meaning to ask, are you a trekkie?) I had this mapped out for six chapters, but chapter four sneaked in while I wasn't looking. We'll see. This might be the first story I finish. How sad is that?
person neelix
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A rose... he gave her a bloody rose and I blubbed, again.... oh good grief.

I love this so much, I seriously want you to write like a demon and get the next chapter up... :)

And yes, I am a trekkie... before Severus, my heart belonged to Jean Luc! haha