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for Just For Tonight

by soldiersgirl0709

person carha
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet. I'm hoping you make it more than a one shot. You have such talent with writing.
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person twinsie
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue this story. I love Remus/Hermione fics! You can't end it there and I love Tonks bashing...it's almost as good as Ron and Ginny bashing. I'm evil, I know...bwa ha ha.
person Utopia (just not logged in)
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't keep up with you, can I?!

This was simply LOVELY, the emotions were practically wafting off the screen! The one-shot works, but it ends so suddenly and abruptly; a little more would be nice - even if there is no smut with it and they don't have a happily ever after.

The morning after - or whenever after - would be a very interesting dynamic to see, and to see if anyone else notices that things have changed. They've crossed a line that is one-way, they can't go back to platonic friendship now. Its like the butterfly effect - they've set into motion things that cannot be undone, and the people around them are going to change due to that.

And I find myself getting a little too into the philosopy here.

I'm looking forward to more RL/HG - but I still want to see a HG/SB from you - I want to see what you do with Sirius.

*cuddles*
person 666devil
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great writing. loved it. thanks.
person Gertie
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of extending this story. Oneshots are great, but it feels like there's more story (and smut) to tell.
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This was just beautiful. And I sincerely hope that you do continue it. Though if you don't it was still wonderful. Thank you for sharing it!
person Ale
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. I loved reading this. You're definitely up there as one of my favorite RL/HG writers! =D
person Megan
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nope this totally can NOT be a one-shot! I love Remus/Hermione and there aren't enough good stories out there...although there could be a million and it still wouldn't be enough. LOL! But really you've gotta continue, PLEASE! Or else I'm gonna cry and I'm told it's pathetic when I cry!
person mariteri
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I love your writing. This fic was a great read. It would be interesting to see how much further you could take it. Great job and I hope to read more of your work soon.

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