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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I
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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you're my kind of grandma! i think i love your work! *kisses*
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok the first chap was brilliant, took me completely by surprise, and the second was sexy as hell! Please continue these they are delicious!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohoh! A twist! Well played, sir.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories and have been reading them all, but with the fear that none of them will ever be finished. Let us know if you prefer to begin many new stories or are actually going to finish any of them! We love all of your stories, but they have to reach an end at some time.5r
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOh, that was nice and hot. You had me going in the first chapter. Here I was picturing them all wrong, mmmm, D-lish!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 2)
I liked this chapter as well, but...it felt a little bit as if something were missing. If Sev's fantasy was to be pampered, Harry didn't really do very much to fufill it. I kind of thought the fantasy part could have gone on a little longer, as it felt a little rushed. Still, I did like it, I liked that you acknowledged that Severus wouldn't be as comfortable verbally expressing his feelings, but was willing to show Harry by indulging his fantasy. Will there be more? I hope so! Update soon!
I liked this chapter as well, but...it felt a little bit as if something were missing. If Sev's fantasy was to be pampered, Harry didn't really do very much to fufill it. I kind of thought the fantasy part could have gone on a little longer, as it felt a little rushed. Still, I did like it, I liked that you acknowledged that Severus wouldn't be as comfortable verbally expressing his feelings, but was willing to show Harry by indulging his fantasy. Will there be more? I hope so! Update soon!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was owned by a cat too, my Fidget was an old lady and died just before Christmas :( You forget how much a say (or is it meow) a cat has over you when they're not there anymore. Definately, you don't own a cat, they just let you live in the same house as them and own you. lol.
Chapter 1 was brilliant! I could see the twist coming at the end - though I think you made that intentional. However, I love that you let Severus get his dream job of DADA professor... and can we presume that Harry had some *eh hem* private lessons with Snape so he could be good nough to teach potions?
The D/s was well written and focussed on the trust between the pair. It takes a lot to tell your partner a fantasy, never mind them like it and act it out with you! This alone gives a 3D background to their relationship and hints at how well the pair know each oher and trust one another. Yes, there is love, but trust was what realy came across in this.
Now... onward to see what Sev's fantasy is; but before I go: 11/10
Chapter 1 was brilliant! I could see the twist coming at the end - though I think you made that intentional. However, I love that you let Severus get his dream job of DADA professor... and can we presume that Harry had some *eh hem* private lessons with Snape so he could be good nough to teach potions?
The D/s was well written and focussed on the trust between the pair. It takes a lot to tell your partner a fantasy, never mind them like it and act it out with you! This alone gives a 3D background to their relationship and hints at how well the pair know each oher and trust one another. Yes, there is love, but trust was what realy came across in this.
Now... onward to see what Sev's fantasy is; but before I go: 11/10
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus and Harry are alarmingly alike - as childern both had nothing and lived in abusive households. They came to Hogwarts as strangers to magic and both stuck out like sore thumbs.
It is so sad that Severus has being pampered as a fantasy - to be brought to fruition once in a blue moon... those two need pampering just because the day has a Y in it! I don't see them as a particularly touchy feely pair - but a shared bath followed by a massage every night would probably be just enough pampering to keep them happy!
If it isn't the end, is there a chance of seeing a mutual fantasy, or just an everyday occurance of their normality? Something that is clearly the Potions Master AND the DADA professor?
Another 11/10
It is so sad that Severus has being pampered as a fantasy - to be brought to fruition once in a blue moon... those two need pampering just because the day has a Y in it! I don't see them as a particularly touchy feely pair - but a shared bath followed by a massage every night would probably be just enough pampering to keep them happy!
If it isn't the end, is there a chance of seeing a mutual fantasy, or just an everyday occurance of their normality? Something that is clearly the Potions Master AND the DADA professor?
Another 11/10
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just hot and I didnt really expect that to be Harry's fantasy I thought it was Severus's but it was great none the less