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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jjust to let you know crookshanks is a boy cat so you might what to change that she into he
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind fluffy:-) As long as Ron is dumped, I am perfectly happy:-))
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Severus doesn't kill Ron because then Hermione would be alone since he would be in Azkaban. If Ron did attack her, what did he mean by asking her what she was doing at Hogwarts. I am curious as to why he would be there. I look forward to reading more.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how dare ron
thanks for an update
thanks for an update
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
alright bring on the action! i will be waiting1 update soon! :)
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snape is a little too OOC for my tastes. Snape would never say 'Let's do it', it's just not him. Maybe you could try to develop the characters a little. Tell us what they're thinking. I do like the story, though. Keep it up.
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay i just found your story and i love it!! i love the way you have severus' charater. i also love that she is having twins! (i have always wanted to have twins) glad ron is almost out of the picture at least as a boyfriend. love hermiones parents totally wonderful. now i am dying for more chapters and i really hope that you have lots planned for the story for i love long stories!!! really long stories! :) please update soon!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am glad that Hermione and Severus have talked to each other. I hope that they do get together and raise their babies at Hogwarts. I can't wait to read more soon.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon!