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June 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see this fineshed to bad it was abandoned
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't realize you've updated! So, I've been catching up on the last few chapters. It's all going downhill! I really can't believe his panick attack turned to running off (which is understandable), then to drugs...I hope he gets better. And please update again! =)
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...really didnt like this chapter. Snape on drugs? Now thats just NOT right.
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I hope that Molly and Poppy will be able to get Severus through this and then tell him about Hermione. Then maybe he will realize how much of an idiot he is being and return to his family. If he doesn't feel like they should get married right away, he should tell Hermione so that they can work it out together. I look forward to reading more.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story, but I find myself concerned with your grammar and spelling. Make sure to have your story beta'd and if you need a beta, let me know. I do highly enjoy this story line, but sometimes as a reader and a beta, I tend to not like to read stories because of misuse of words and simple spelling errors. Update soon =]
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, why did you make snape leave hermione needs him. I hope he comes back.
Thanks for the update, hope they come more often.
Thanks for the update, hope they come more often.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I think Severus is being childish by running away. I hope that someone finds him and knocks some sense into him. Hermione wants him no matter what. She won't go back to Ron now that everyone knows that she and Severus are expecting twins. Hopefully she will not get too overly stressed and end up having problems with the pregnancy. She would really hate Severus if she ended up losing her babies or having them early. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story, the plot is good however it feels a bit "thin". You keep the characters and their interactions moving at a
nice pace but is still feels a bit like reading a rough draft. Flesh things out a bit more; add more 'atmosphere', describe the rooms
they are in and the clothing they are wearing. Keep going! :)
nice pace but is still feels a bit like reading a rough draft. Flesh things out a bit more; add more 'atmosphere', describe the rooms
they are in and the clothing they are wearing. Keep going! :)
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.