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for Her Dying Breath

by LadyVoldemort87

person Anon
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so sad. And the twist, I never expected that. I didn't know where you were going with this one. Makes you wonder if he been loved when he was a child if he would still turn out the way he did in the books.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:::crying:::
How heartbreaking for his mother to have lost her husband, and then her life making it so that she will not be able to shower her little boy with the love that he (all children) deserve.

Thank goodness he has finally found love and someone to share himself with by Hermione and their son. Beautiful!
person chesterzerousygirl
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that is good. I like how you made him see through his mom's eyes. Please tell me there's more.
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person klbblk
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i love how it ended :)
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a very interesting take on what might have been. I like it...and your writing is awesome!!