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for Balance of Extremes

by chisox727

person Jilliane
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM


I agree with SoftObsidian that you should have broken this up into chapters, but oh! How lovely it was! Excellently written, beautiful, touching, and sad. Bravo! I'm off to read some of your other writings.
person Jilliane
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Oh yes, and I would like to add that I would also like to see you continue this and write about the missing 15 years and how they fell for one another in the first place. Please consider it, and please e-mail alert me if you do it! jillianetpr@yahoo.com