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Hey^^
Just found this story and I realy like it. It's not the regular and I enjoy reading new Ideas, exceptionally when reading Harry Potter Fanfiktions.
I like Albus' personality very much and I see forward to the next chapter.

Greetings,
sessy

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So...OMG are you going to continue this? I feel bad even writing a review like this because your writing is so solid and so elegant and intriguing, you make albus severus so enticing and interesting, i just want to find out more!

oh, this is so enthrallng. I couldn't stop reading. Very interesting mind set for an 11 year old. I can't wait for more, and especially on how Albus was going to make the boy his. Please write more!

I'm glad you are still working on this. I love the story and can't wait to see all these plans begin to unfurl.

Its good, but its completely unbelievable. No 10 year old, no matter how smart, plans that much. No 10 year old is -that- devious. And no 10 year old has secrets that big. Its just unrealistic to write about a child smiling and keeping up appearances when said child has nothing wrong with his life. Sometimes there are rare cases when children of that age keep up such appearances to hide other abuse. However in this story, that is not the case. The writing is good, that's not what irritates me. What I am irritated by is the way you write Albus.

I usually don't read this ship, but the summary attacked my curiosity. So I read it, and I loved it. I can't believe you only have 3 reviews. This story is fantastic! The writing is superb, Albus's character is wonderfully written, and though there isn't a lot of dialogue, it really fits the situation. The build-up and the "getting to know the characters" process is really well-done. I really liked the quote you used for why he felt that way for that person that he hasn't met. I loved that Albus called his mother "Ginny" and his reasons for it made me chuckle. His relationship with Harry was interesting and I loved that he thought his father could do better than his mother...lol, I think he could've too. As for James and Rose, lol, that's interesting. I really like how Albus's eleven-year-old mind works, it's so complex, dark, and oddly humorous...but not overly so. Well-done! Keep up the good work.

I really like this story and the way you are developing the Harry/ Albus relationship. Can't wait for Al to get to Hogwarts.

May I say this looks like it is going to be a great story.