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A beautiful dress, and I hope that Draco is suitably impressed....hopefully Zabini won't cause any lasting damage. Update soon! :D

I can't wait to hear Draco's reaction to her outfit.. and undoubtedly Blaise will have something to say... looking forward to more... Please message me again when more is up...
thanks..
Maria.

Ooooo I didn't think that Blaise had anything to do with the snake, still that doesn't mean he didn't know anything about it. I love the look Hermione gave Draco when he lectured them about not splitting up while on patrol. Hermione's dress sounds simply beautiful, I like to think she'll be amazed when she puts her mask on and sees the full effect. Of course, I'm more looking forward to Draco's reaction when he sees her in it. How's that saying go? The perfect dress is the one that makes your partner want to get you out of it. *grins* Looking forward to more. :)

I really liked this, there are some minor error's... probably typo's but the story line is good... excellent actually...
distantly workable with the plot...
please please could you message me when you update...

maria.frost@hotmail.co.uk

thanks...

Hmm, I'm actually undecided as to whether Blaise had anything to do with this. Somehow I thought he'd have a more hands on approach. Either way, it got Malfoy exactly where I hoped he'd be. LOL I loved the line where he thought she'd rather die than think he'd seen her knickers. That was excellent. Can't wiat for more. :)

hmm i like your story, but i think you take a lot of time, until they get together... can you speed up things? please?

aaaaw sooo cute
"you look like shit =)"
lov it cant wait for more
xxx

lol ok so the end of that chapter made me laugh. A person saves your life and you proceed to tell them that they look like shit lol. how awesome is that. i really liked this chapter and i can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one.

Not used to reading a story where Blaise has such a nasty streak but I can certainly see its neccesity. Just more proof that if you take one source of evil out (so to speak), there's another one ready to take it's place. As much as I like to think Hermione can take care of herself, I can't wait to see how this involvement with Blaise pans out. And I loved Draco's reaction to her little note in his book. LOL Looking forward to more. :)

Hermione's comeback to Blaise's comment was brilliant.