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LMAO It is indeed getting "super sexy" (to quote Gabby1234) in here. Loved the detailing of Hermione imagining Draco pleasuring her and taking her to the very edge of fantasy seduction and beyond. And if she thought that was good, I can't wait until she gets the real thing. (I certainly hope she gets the real thing - LOL)

I loved that Draco fought with himself not to touch her, not to want her or to desire her and acknowledged that it was a losing battle just the same. He gave himself so many outs and took none of them, not until the very end.

I wonder how he knew Dean Thomas would have a hangover cure too? I wonder what changed that would make him accept something from a Gryffindor as a relief (unless it was the mother of all hangovers) and more to the fact that Dean actually let him know about said potion/cure. I know that's not what your story is about, I was just curious.

I also hope you really don't mind my musing out loud, like with Blaise for example. Please tell me to shut up if I am and if I ever do actually figure something out *laughs* please don't tell me. I worry I might spoil something (Now I sound conceited, I apologise, it's not my intention)

Good to know I'm not the only one who has level headed moments although with some of the things I have done over the years I really wonder if that comment applies to me. I must also admit that I love the fantasy and first time moments too which is why I'm glad this place, and stories like yours, exist/s. :) OK, ramble over. :)

Are you f*cking kidding me?! That's where you leave it? Ugh! Talk about all build up but no delivery. lol. I am loving this story, and can't wait for the next chapter. The final word was the breaker for me. You are doing a great job with this story. Keep up the great work, and pllleeeasse update soon! Or some of us might spontaneously combust. :-)

oh this was great talk about four play! i bet when you were writing this you knew people would be like " is it me or is it super sexy in here?" awesome work I'll be looking everyday for the new chapter ugghh so great im jealous of how well that chapter was written I certainly need more-i cannot wait for the sex chapter i hate it when im left on a cliff hanger like this I'm literally on the verge of my seat!

Oh wow. Hot hothot. I can't wait to read more!

wow. great fic. so freaking hot there....

Holy crow was chap. 10 hot!! You're doing a great job. Can't wait to see more.

I liked this, I can't wait to get started on to chapter two!

So, this is the prequel? Because the next chapter could be the first, couldn't it? Makes the last line of it even more significant. :D

AH!!!! At chapter 10! What a cliff hanger! I got so sucked up into the story that I didn't even realize I'd reached the last chapter LOL! Imagine my surprise when I got to the bottom and realized I'd just read it all, and had been too entranced to notice!

I loved how they're coming together, having her repeat those naughty words, and then the "knee" thing...sighs...obviously will be waiting on edge for more, lol! Really, they didn't have sex but her repeating those words with him as close to her as he was - I'm all excited, and it was hot! Kudos!

How, oh how, could you stop there?! I know it was nice and long, and yes, you wrote it REALLY well, and yes the tension built to epic proportions, and yes, the story is really good so far, but seriously?! Please please please update again soon, okay? Thanks. :-) HG4eva