rate_review Reviews

You must write more!!! Amazing so far!

Thanks so much for updating. Great work!!

this is driving me crazy, but still i love the story, and how sweet malfoy in love. I like head games just fine (hehehe) but i would prefer the sex chapters more, no pressure, i really am super enjoying this story.

I like the slow build...the anticipation...the fact that both are fighting it, while still giving in to some of it. Keep up the great work! HG4eva

Personally I don't mind if a story has the characters jumping in where angels fear to tread or building up to the slow, sexy climax (or should that be conclusion?) LOL They both have their place. But for this story, as far as I am concerned, the build up is more than fine. I'm loving it. :)

Still great... the tension between them is palpable. Keep up the great work! Well be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

sugypunk

thanks for your review! I'm not so much feeling my story lately...

especially after reading THIS!

Officially I'm not much of a Hermione/Draco fan... Draco belongs to Harry, dammit!

however this is done rather amaxingly... You have a good relationship with your words. You know how to use them, and they seem to do what you want... Everything is beautifully descriptive; you seem to write like me (process-wise), seeing it in your head, using what you're thinking when you hit a dead spot. (sleepkissing statement was really funny to me, because that's exactly what I would do...)

so anyway, I'm loving this, even though Draco's cheating on our poor Harry (who by the way is NOT dying [sneak peak]) and I'm definately coming back for more... I hope you're a semi-frequent updater!

Well, I'm glad the 'final' chapter is a long way off....looks like it's Draco that's having problems with the arrangement. I'm glad you're giving him a hard time about it. :D

When are you going to update? WHEN???????????????????????? aRGH! You can't do this to us horny people!!!!!!!

I must say, that I take my hat off to you. You certainly have a way with UST. This is hands down some of the most erotic sexual tension I've ever read. In my opinion, slow stories are always a better read than ones that just go straight to the gusto. Let's face it, so many stories just go down hill after the big sex scene. Slow build-up is so much better in my opinion. It gives more time for plot development and characterization.

I was literally holding my breath during those last two chapters. Does Draco have anymore brilliant games to play with Hermione? You're doing a fantastic job! Keep up the good work.