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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your response made my day! I didn't want to take up half of the review page singing your praises (although it would be easy), so I decided to be as succint as possible. I see it worked.
person yeniferr
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea what dissapointment I recieved when I went to click the next chapter button and saw that it wasn't there.

I LOVE this story. It's so... good. It's really, really good. I love that you gave an explanation for "Quidditch muscles" without giving an explanation. They have to exist! How else do you stay on a broom and fly around, sometimes against strong winds? Muscles would tense and relax with movement while you're flying, just like they do when you (maybe its just me) do sit ups.

Heh... sorry about the rant.

Well, yeah, I love this story and am VERY glad I finally clicked the link. God, that repeat-the-naughty-words-I-whisper-into-your-ear thing was SO INCREDIBLY HOT. And they weren't even naked.

Kudos to you and this fic. It's going at good pace and I can't wait for it to speed up! I'll be keeping my eye out for an update, Missy.


(:
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOhhh, her first aye? I cant wait to see what he says. And the note saying they were friends...I love this.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I said "yay!" out loud when you updated.

Granted, it was a small, almost inaudible 'yay', but out loud all the same.

YOU ARE EVIL. -insert empty threats and unnecessary death threats here-

Update soon -death threat- please!
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i don't understand!!! why is draco mad at hermione? did i miss something? was it because he finally admitted that he liked her?

by the way that a great line to begin the chapter with. i was like hehe yes!!
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't you just want to bang their heads together??? Hello!!! LOL

Now I wonder how Daphne knew what was going on and why Draco seemed so relieved that he 'had permission' from her of all Slytherins? Ooo I wonder if she is seeing a Gryffindor on the sly too? And there they are, Hermione and Draco in their own little worlds getting themselves off over eachother and none the wiser that each is doing the same thing. LOL And there he is again trying to tell her he's not her friend. Methinks the lad doth protest too much (eth)!!! ;)

Okay, it's your story and if you want to do the slow build up, that should be respected. You don't have to just churn out posts. I love that you update often but I'd also like to think you are happy with your work before it appears on here. You go at your pace, not anyone else's. (I certainly don't mean for this to offend any reviewers, I want to get where we are going just as much as anyone else, I just don't want the story in the mean time to be compromised - hope that makes sense) :)

Ha ha, you see I was working overtime on that whole skirt angle, perhaps I think too much but I could just see her teasing him without realising it and yet being well aware of ladylike decorum at the same time.

I know this bit wasn't addressed to me but I'm butting again, sorry. My family know I write fan fics (given I had a big break between stories so they don't know about new stuff) but none have shown any interest in reading them as they are not into HP at all. I like that your dad wanted to even though I'd be thinking the same thing (OMG no!!!!) LMAO I love how, for the most part, that people here are very giving when they review whether it's praise or constructive criticism, and that sometimes means more to me than what my family might think anyway. Mine were just happy I found a way to channel through some rough times and that I accomplished something and I love them for that too. Okay, shush time! Back to waiting for next update. ;) LOL
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess I'm not finished as I saw something in the comments of another reviewer.

Gabby1234, I love your sister's stories. She rocks!! And I'd love to know if you went out wearing one of those shirts you described too. LOL I do like Ron and Hermione for the official series but Dramione is my favourite fan fic read. And I was thrilled when Ginny and Harry got together (I just knew they would) ;)

Are you writing any stories too? :)
person Winchiwitch
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you trying to physically kill me!?! I had my boyfriend bugging me while trying to read through about 70% of this chapter and then when I finally got to the end they were so close to kissing and then NOTHING!!! I felt like crying with fustration.

Having said that, I'm really enjoying how you mix the tension with an almost friendly atmosphere. It's like they need to be near each other, but neither will admit it. It truely is addictive reading. Now I need more.
person gabby1234
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really loved this chapter man you can feel the tension where the way that Hermione is frustrated and she stuck inside all the time with school and harry and voldermort, ect it makes the sexual tension that much more real! is there a one shot smut story somewhere else on fanfic for this one if there is i have to read it! My sister is ichi ruki i read her not so story and i fell in love with dramione even after i read all the books i still couldn't see it any other way there perfect and so is ginny and harry. i see ginny with blaise stories, poeple like that but its not the same as say hermione and ron. hermione and ron are to easy i mean i really like ron i just think hermione and draco are better but i am really biased. I really want to get a shirt that says harry and ginny forever b*****! with a picture and wear it to the new harry potter 6 movie. haahah and i plan to also with a dramione t-shit it will be awesome!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! A longer chapter!!! And what a chapter! Absolutly loved it! I've gone all tingly!!! I hope it continues to rain for a VERY long time!!! Muha ha ha ha!