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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uhh I really liked the ending!!! I kind of get it now! Yes I re-read it and the devil child is no longer here.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god!!! It's now 7am and I've just spent the last 2 hours battling (A battle of biblical and epic proportions, so thought I'd share!) with a 4 month old baby (my neice) to get her fed, changed and back down to sleep. Its taken me 45 mins alone to change her clothes. Who knew clothes should be so difficult and when you thought you finished and you look at your handy work, you realise the dress is inside out and her baby grow and something else (no idea what to call it!) is the wrong way round so you start all over again. You can't believe how grateful to be reading an amazing fic after all that stress (I'm not a baby person!).
Uhhh can't wait till it snows!But I dont fully understand why Malfoy is in such a mood. I'll probably have to re read it later on when the devil child has gone home. Speaking of which she's woken up again!
person gabby1234
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ichi rukie would love to hear that! aw such sexual angst for the teenagers yes exactly what i love to see! I was kinda sad though when i read this chapter but i was like hey thats all right all in good time!
person gloria
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so intriguing and well-written! i can't wait for more!
person kazfeist
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been out of town, and have just started catching up....thanks so much for the chapter, and for their developing relationship. It's lovely to see it mature. :D
person kazfeist
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dun, dun, dun, DUN!!!! :D
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I make you laugh? YAY!

SO...um...I'm sorry I have to break this to you but...um...I've been cheating on you and HP fanfics. See, I recently discovered the Jonas Brothers and more importanly the ever delisious Kevin Jonas (who is the only one I don't feel bad liking cause he's my age) and, well, I've stryed over to Jonas fanfiction. "I read a Jonas fanfic and I liked! I hope ilke won't mind it." Anyway, I will continue to come back to you! Don't cry!
person kazfeist
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, the tension was thick enough to cut with a knife! :D
person kazfeist
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The poor dears! I know you're planning on a Christmas holiday for them....can't wait for it. :D
person JKRsunkmyship
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter! I might have already said this....but you're doing a wonderful job with the pacing, infuriating because I'm dying for that that first spark that sets the whole fire blazing, but wonderful. I'm just dying to know what happens next.

And as for Moments of Sanity.... there is still one chapter left, but unfortunately my computer is broken. I'm currently reading this on a friends computer.... So I'm trying to get the chapter written out by hand so that when I get my computer back or have free time where I can go to a library or something, I can get the new chapter written quickly. Unfortunately, I do much better writing on the computer than by hand. My brain just moves to fast and when I try to write by hand I end up leaving out some of the elaboration that normally would have come and it tends to feel a bit choppy.

But until I can update, I will content myself with check every other day or so to see what stories have been updated... and sneaking a quick read to tide me over.