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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. gosh. i seriously gasped out loud when i read that hermione told draco that. why would she do that?!?!?! i guess it was perfect timing if you think about it. gah now i gotta wait for draco's reaction! you're killing me.

i also love how you have hermione fight back. obviously, it's not realistic for her to win, especially without her wand, but i thought it was very appropriate of her to fight back and at least deal in some damage before zabini tried to... you know. go hermione!!

and i loove your version of draco. gah. i can't even speak real criticism of him cuz i just love everything about him!!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! i loved that chapter, it was intense and i cant wait to see what draco's reaction is!! update soon!! ^_^
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa whoa whoa where in the hell did that last sentence come from? lol...damn i normally love blaise but that sucker just got served lol...and hermione was right to kick his ass...i love how you portrayed the anger that overcame draco when he saw hermione...awesome!
person dyllan
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh this is such an amazingly well written story. and wow! what a cliffhanger!
i'm super excited for the next chapter. keep up the awesome work and fast updates :]
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My reaction...ummm...WHOOPEEEE!!!! How's that? lol Seriously, this story is absolutely terrific! I love every nuance of it. The slow burn of their feelings, the need to do nothing to rock the boat, the desire to do everything to rock the boat. It's simply perfect! Keep up the great work! HG4eva
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!!!!!

I have just spent the last 2 hours reading the 16 chapters in this story.

I don't know what made me do it but DAMN, I love this story....

Update soon.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent story ^_^ I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
person Tootsie
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can touch his feeling. (^_^ waiting next chapter, want to know the way Draco'a act and talk to Hermione.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's the least I can do since you take the time to write such a lovely fanfic. :)

Great job.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is phenomenal! Please please PLEASE update soon.