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her first? :D i wonder what draco's thinking. hmmm


and blaise should get gangraped, haha.

Oh no cliffy! Now i'm sad. But i really loved this chappy. keep the good stuff coming :]

I am really enjoying this story....I know Im terrible about reviewing, forgive me, Im trying to be better....anyhoo...I do like this very much! Please dont break my heart by not finishing it!!!!!!


Happy Writing!
~SG~

You!!! Oh My GAWD!!! As soon as Blaise turned up I knew something bad was going to happen and I knew he was going to try something but yeesh! It's so different thinking it to reading it. That was brilliant. His anger and total lack of control was perfectly written. You just knew he'd lost it and I love that you did not make Hermione a victim. She fought hard and did not give up. Gryffindor bravery or not, she wasn't taking any of that crap. And yes, Draco did come to the rescue but she wasn't finished with him. She let Blaise know just how dispicable he was and further more, how much less of a person he was than her too. I think Blaise finally got the message. I don't think he'll be bothering her again. Of course, I may be wrong. ;) And oooooo I had hoped she'd left a positive comment on the note she left Draco. Simply the truth, not some smart arse comeback. YAY. But of course, then you drop the bombshell of her asking him to be her first!!!!!!!!! And LMAO - Explaining to Draco that Blaise had seen her "um kissing" Viktor outside and thought he'd have a piece of that for himself. Loved it!!

On a side note, it's advisory not to wear a pony tail or any hairstyle that would allow a potential attacker to immobilise you thus gaining control of the situation. Women with loose or short hair are 'less likely' to be attacked. That's my public announcement for the day (sorry). I'm sure you have smart readers who already know that though.

And hey, if I'm talking too much and it's bothering your readers, I'll try and keep it down a bit, it's just that I'm enjoying the conversation as well as the story. :) Please let me know. I don't want yuou to loose any readers because of me.

Finally, I like your take on Daphne, someone looking on the outside in always has a better perspective of what is going on. Well thought out. As always, shall be waiting for more. :)

Ch 16 - Great chapter. I hope they talk to each other soon...they can't keep on avoiding each other, can they?

That was mean, but a great cliffhanger please update soon. I love your story, great work keep it coming!!

Ch 17 - I hope Blaise gets expelled and sent to Azkaban! Please update again soon!

horray all in good time is right wow i could never imagine saying "i want you to be my first"
oh ahahahah how romantic, i cannot wait! I really liked the way this chapter was written i have issues with violation stories so i had to skip some of the paragraphs but i liked coming in where draco helps her and hermione gets her revenge that was awesome, truly awesome chapter!

LOL! Yeah, from one closet HP fan to another, I know what you mean. My husband isn't really interested in reading in the first place, so when he watches me write, it gets a little distracting, and I have to ask him to stop! I was telling him about my next chapter, and he said that he was going to have to sit down and actually read it because he had no idea what I was talking about! My mom knows generally what I write, but I don't think it would be something I would want her to read... with me in the room especially! Ah, if our parents only knew... ;-)

Ah! Total cliffie! Please please please update again soon! I can't wait to see Draco's reaction... unless she meant her first something else. No, that would be too cruel - right?