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I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapters!

I have a feeling that their relationship will be strained even more from this chappie on for a while. But it all leads up to the moments that we want, right? It has to get worse before it gets better. So YAY!!!

Hey! omgoodness. this is really one of my all time fave stories. like, in all honesty, i think you're a fabulous reader. i just started reading it a few hours ago, and i could not stop. I love your Draco in this, because in all honesty, i've always pictured him as being more sensitive than he ever let on, and his family life probably was not the best. actually, i betcha, that is the understatement of the year. after all, his father IS lucius malfoy. but then again, i also like a redeemed lucius. and a dark draco can be fun too. idk. i like all the faces of the malfoys. especially draco. and also, i think you're really nailing harry. he always struck me as being very reasonable...unless things were kept from him, like in OotP. I know you probably get a lot of complaints about "WHY HASN'T THERE BEEN SEX!?" but honestly, they're a bit young, and like hermione said, a lot of girls confuse love with sex, granted hermione's not like that. and really, they've only been tentative friends for about a month, so they need to wait a while before they do the adult hokey-pokey...[my friend came up with that...i find it amusing]. and another thing, is i like their banter, because i mean really, who else is gonna provide her with intellectual stimulation? certainly not ron, and poor harry has so much on his plate, what with defeating moldy voldie and all.

on a different note, i was a bit surprised to see blaise so violent in this story, as i sometimes am a fan of blaise/hermione. but it's your story, and i think you portray him as he probably should be portrayed: a death eater's son, who has probably seen his father do many of the things he talks about doing. plus, he's a slytherin. also, i've read in some stories, and in a story of mine that i really DO need to update, pansy has/is been/being portrayed as a very misunderstood girl, who's actually quite nice, very witty, and yes, a bit cruel, but only to those who threaten her, and hers. *shrug* oh, and i like daphne! she seems really down to earth, but like you've said, she is in love with someone who has already graduated.

i know, this is an extremely LONNNNNNG review, but i just had so much to say to you. oh and just some few tiny things. i think that over christmas break something should happen. like major snow. and a snow fight b/t dm and hg. also i think i'd like to see her make a snow angel, and it start snowing again, and he kiss her in the snow. gah. that would be just perfect. i really can't wait to read harry's reaction to draco wanting to fight for the light. ron surely won't trust him, but i honestly think harry will be level-headed. i think he already suspects that hermione may have feelings for our fave dragon.

gosh, there is just so much i could say to you right now. but, this review has been long enough, so i think i shall quit. i would love to hear your feedback on my story, and maybe give me some ideas. it's called Unwinding Cable Car. and it's on page 14 of this site. sooo far back i know. but i haven't updated since april. and i reallllyyyy need some reviews. lol. but no pressure, i know you have to be super busy. anyway, thanks for reading my outrageously long review, and i hope i helped somehow.

i also just realized that in one of the first sentences i said "you're a fabulous reader" i meant writer. oops. my bad. although, im sure you are a fabulous reader. but i digress.

No need to rush to the sex part.... Besides foreplay is sooo much more satisfying. You are quite an expert in teasing us though. I am very excited to read the next one. Please dont let us wait too long...

I always thought that Draco wouldn't normally be at a loss for words, it's only ever been Hermione who has really stumped him but I imagined him to be a quick thinker just the same and to 'watch' him go through these thought processes is brilliant. Stunned into silence indeed! LOL And all he could do was try and blank it out when you know that's all he's going to be thinking about for quite some time. :) The best part though was how it made him question so many things, you can see he's come to a huge turning point and it wasn't just because of what she had said or what Blaise had done. It's like the light finally came on in his heart, not just his head. I also think it's just typical of Hermione's character to want to try and rehabilitate Blaise rather than punish him by sending him to Azkaban. He'd never learn remorse there and although there's a chance he won't change his way of thinking, at least now she has given him the option of becoming a better person - which I believe is what Hermione is all about - second chances. Just don't expect a third. ;) LOL

I'm looking forward to Harry's reaction to finding out that Draco wants to be on their side but it won't be anything near the reaction I'm expecting from Ron. LMAO And I love how Ginny seems to always be one step ahead of everyone else where other people's emotions are concerned. Of course, she needed help getting Harry but that's typical, isn't it? You don't see the things that are closest to your heart. I really thought the fact that Ginny was the only daughter in several generations of Weasley's and the fact that she was the seventh child would come into play in the official books but oh well, wasn't meant to be, I guess.

Good on you for officially stopping apologising, you have nothing to apologise for. Some stories need a build up, some get right into it, both have their merits and their place. And I'm pleased you enjoy my reviews and that they don't seem to be bothering anyone else because I don't intend for them to be annoying. No more on that subject either. LOL ;) And there you go, Blaise was good for something after all, a lead into something most delish! LOL And please, by all means, continue to surprise me, I love it. :)

i've been reading this story for a while and i really like it...i like how the story can show the confusing and many of feeling between them...and they don't admit it lolt

even though i wish i could read sex scene sooner but i like this story goes this way...

keep updating!

hahaha i like how hermione was caught of guard by harry's comment. yes well i'm sure she be wanting to do some kissing and lots more with malfoy ;]

i'm happy zabini is gone, evil little git.

So I totally snarfed my coffee when I reached the point that the Weasleys were having sex on their dining table. I had all 3 children looking at me like I had lost my mind as I sat here with coffee coming out my nose. so thanks LOL


Interesting chapter, full of snippets and connectors. I am anxious to read more, especially how Mione decides to proceed against Blaise...


Still reading, so grateful you have no plans to abandon the fic =).


Happy Writing,
SG

great update...so Draco is going to switch sides and I totally sympathize with Ron about losing his appetite after seeing his parents together...i heard mines...ewww! anyway i wanna know if Draco is going to take Hermione up on his offer

You don't have to apologize!! We'll wait! And ooooo..what's Harry's interest in Draco all of a sudden....this is getting so tense! I love that Draco made an official turn around in this chapter...I'm giddy...you're doing this the RIGHT way...painstakingly slow...we feel what they're feeling..and it's just wonderfully agonizing and YUMMY at the same time. Keep it coming!