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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

person smmz79
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think draco is fighting a losing battle with himself... great chaps!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't decide what I love more, Hermione's reaction to that kiss - the dream-like state in which she undressed and got herself into bed and then having reality hit and make her be determined not to be just another notch on his wand OR Draco's reaction, his feelings of self doubt, unworthyness, his worry that he could not deliver on Hermione's expectations.

Loved the history of he and Pansy and it is interesting that no-one questioned Blaise's disappearance. And what else does Daphne know? I'm starting to think that maybe she's not a true SLytherin and she should have been put in Ravenclaw. LOL Clever little miss....
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was one hot kiss! I reckon those lights knew what they were doing when they were following Hermione around haha :p I think Draco's reactions to how he feels about Hermione are really realistic, a boy like that wouldn't be used to those feelings for someone like her and he'd probably try to push them away. Silly tosser :) lol!

LOL at the sock designer!! Why did you design socks? I'm guessing for money, unless you have a fondness for them and felt that people needed to jazz up their socks...okay I'll leave you alone now :p

Please make sure at least someone takes off their top in the next chappy haha.

Sara xox
person ichiruki
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sure call me Ichi (eee-chee) isn't too far off actually. In Japanese I believe it means first, or one, but if you're me, you picked it because you love the idea of Ichigo Kurosaki and Rukia Kuchiki together, they have a love/hate but respect on both sides relationship, even though bicker like crazy! LOL But as the moniker implies, I'm in the camp that thinks one day their gonna kiss. But I won't delve into my sick Bleach manga obsession that oddly enough, I don't write fan fic about!

;) I should be writing my final paper, but I had to come check on my stories cause it's been about a week! And I squee'd at the fairies out of the box part...sweetness! How can you not lose a little coolness when there are fairies heatin' things up with glowing all sensualness n' stuff!!!! Hmmm wonder what happens by the time Yule Ball takes place. Heh, heh. And not to imply the gift and the ball are related, but just what will he think when he finally gets her gift, I mean, when he gets his hands on that oh so pristine snitch! (Bawhahahahah!) Actually, I have no idea if that's where you're taking it, but I couldn't help but to draw comparisons. LOL, Hermione and her gift giving ways and all.

I'd be up for a drunk dialing fic in a couple of months, Aug is going to be way too busy, but I think Sept might be when I could start half-assing it and by that I mean writing a first draft that will be awful but at least get the ideas out of my head and ready to be paired down. Someone posted a challenge for Dark!Hermione and I'd started on a fic to keep the writing muscles in order, a one shot to be exact, of evil Hermione called Push, but it didn't feel angsty enough, even though I do something awful to Draco in it, the dialog still seemed flat to me, so I might scrap it, lol. See, I could be the comedy to your angst and vice versa! ;)

ichi-who reviewed twice but had to delete once for missing words in a sentence, pretty sad when you can't even review without messing up!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I missed reviewing on the last one. It was good though. Anyways on to this chapter. It's taking forever. Now it just feels like you're teasing us. Well update soon.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! :D
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Hermione...go get your man!!! Make him talk...and then jump his bones! : ) Seriously....told you this already but what a normal and completely appropriately awkward progression.....exhaling, if he can wait, so can I! lol
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this on CG, when you had posted a oneshot by the same name, but then I was disappointed that you took it down!! I've just reread it, and I'm really liking the plot turns, focusing on every aspect of life at Hogwarts, not just focusing on Draco and Hermione. Really really good!! As for the no sex bit, don't apologize! This is your story, and all I can say to that, is patience is a virtue, and good things come to those who wait.....
person sugypunk
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome first kiss... can't see what the second one will bring... And the little fairy lights were a nice touch. It painted a nice picture. :-) Oh, and I don't mind sugy. lol. I got the name from my dogs. We have a white husky we call sugar (aka sugy). So it's not bad. Well, unless if your thinking about it like a dog name, then it would be bad. Anyway, I'm off to update myself. Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person alyssium
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are good...so damn good, keep it up!