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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness woman!!! What do I say to this? (without giving away that parts of it fulfilled a few private fantasies). That was damn hot indeed and again I have to agree with your Hermione because the buggar drew it out too long and he should have just got in there and done the deed!! LOL And then slowed it down for rounds two to exhaustion. ROFL!! Isn't it funny how so often when writing a story about Draco, quite a few writers (myself included) tend to give him sexual experiences far beyond his years? And yes, pleasantly, I found with this chapter that although he still had experience and a good deal of control, the vulnerability was there, the anxiousness to please, to satisfy, the self doubt of someone not so sure of himself was there too and I LOVED that. One of your reviewers mentioned having a 'cougar' moment. All I can say is "ditto"!!! And there's no doubt that Hermione enjoyed her 'educational' experience. LOL
LMAO and thank you for putting me on the stand in list right behind you. I do hope you leave a little something left over for me to toy with. ;)
LMAO and thank you for putting me on the stand in list right behind you. I do hope you leave a little something left over for me to toy with. ;)
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. That was... That was... THE WAS SO GOD DAMN AMAZING!!! I am shocked and awed at your talant and skill for depicting this scean. It was so much a perfectly beautiful and itimate moment between the two characters that I feel as though I should look away from the images you depicted. It was such a personal moment filled with so much emotion and FEELING that it seems so private. I have read many stories on AFF and this is the first I've felt the need to leave a review. Wow. Just wow. I can't wait for the next chapter and the afterglow that's sure to come with it. Whatever happens next in your story is sure to be spactacular now that this has come between the two. Wow. p.s I'm so happy that you've posted this story on FF.net so I could add it to my favorites. Thank you for such a great read.
~Ceri
~Ceri
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD. That was amazing. I can not believe I haven't found this story before! You can only imagine how pleased I was to be able to read it all in one go and get to the wonderful sex, and the love. I am a sucker for love. :) And although I am not much of a fan of anal play even that was portrayed tasteful. Great job, and please keep it up, soon and often!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, nicely built up intensity. I love it. They are almost like magnets so drawn to each other and it's delicious when you keep them from not quite being together. Can't wait for the taking and giving so to speak.....
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just when they're getting down to it, all that longing and UST/F. I was SO looking forward to it.
UPDATE SOON! I need my fix...
UPDATE SOON! I need my fix...
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm caught up now. All I can say is wow! This is really fantastic, you've built the sexual tension between them so well, and that kiss! I am dying to see what happens next, something tells me, (though I hope otherwise), it won't be as obvious as the end of that last chapter seemed to have indicated.
Excellent story dear! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more.
Excellent story dear! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is just fabulous. I just started reading the other day and am officially hooked. Your keeping me on the edge of my seat so keep it up!!
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tamale cookies? haha what is that xD
OMG WHAT R U DOING STOPPING THERE *stab stab* Man, this story has not bored me one bit AT ALL, and it has its amazing funny moments... Please continue!! <333
OMG WHAT R U DOING STOPPING THERE *stab stab* Man, this story has not bored me one bit AT ALL, and it has its amazing funny moments... Please continue!! <333
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Tell me what you want....' That's quite a knicker-wetting chapter title. Let me see....hmmm. I want you to talk dirty to me. Make me say naughty things. Make me forget my name. Make me cry, whimper, mewl, and scream. Tie me up. Spank me. I want you to teach me. I want you to show me everything. Oops! Excuse me. I got carried away there for a second.XD
I can't wait to see what Draco has in store for her. Did I mention, I love a 'bad boy' Draco. What has poor, virginal, Hermione gotten herself into?
Fantastic writing!
I can't wait to see what Draco has in store for her. Did I mention, I love a 'bad boy' Draco. What has poor, virginal, Hermione gotten herself into?
Fantastic writing!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honest to Got this is getting on my nerves do it already. This will be fun to read.. Love it ...