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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

person staycie
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been following your story for a while and I must say... YOUR AMAZING!!! keep up the good work, it always makes my day when you've updated!!!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING!!!! And very, very hot. I don't care too much for the spanking though. Not really my thing. The ass thing I can live with but not one of my favorite things either. I'm picky with my kink. Handcuffs sound hot and windows too. They can be seen and caught in one of those. That would be hilarious. Everything else I loved. It was perfect. Anyways I hope you update soon. Can't wait to find out what else there is waiting for us.
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That was so amazing! Definately worth the wait! That was one of the best lemons, if not the best lemon, that I have ever read! I am so going to start working on your trailer immediately. I'm going out of town in the next few days, but I am so inspired by this chapter that I want to get this done and how! Talk about magnificent! It was so passionate and romantic and so vivid. I could imagine everything so perfectly. Your words were perfection in describing the emotions flowing between them. I cannot wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can tell you only one thing. BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO, Incredible, it was a bliss! FUN FUN FUN!!!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was... damn.... i think i'll just go take that cold shower now
person Pickles
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome and so well written! Update soon I want more hot steamy sex from the pair. Please write a chapter soon on Draco and Hermione and his dark kinky sex fantasies!!
person kazfeist
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No thanks, necessary! And, I noticed a few changes that actually changed the timbre of the piece. The font changes at the end, for example. Can't wait for the rest. :D
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that last chapter erupted every single forbidden emotion I have in me, spectacular writing, it left me gripping the desk knucle white and sweating, needing a very cold shower. GODS I love this story it blew my mind away, you r vey talented and this story is definately different and refreshing, heck before all this happened the tension was enough to blow up a hippogriff. Shakes head...sigh, Keep up the amazing work and please update soon.
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BRAVA!!! And, wow! You are doing a FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC job with this story. I love that he couldn't get the words out almost as much as the fact that she didn't either. I am simply enthralled by this story. I can't wait to see them after the haze wears off. Fingers crossed that they don't panic or fall apart. :-) Thank you!!!! HG4eva
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN.

That's all I can say.