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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that's f*cking hot! lol yeah, i have to say it's really Draco's style lol talking dirty and demanding :P i really love how Draco draw that words on her clit when she came, really creative hehe. it's really long but not boring...can't wait to see what's afterward lol
person gabby1234
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
horray everyone should be drinking champagne for this chapter and he finally declares his love oh man the greatest story by far it was so sweet and loving i loved the way you wrote this chapter several times i re-said sentences in my head thinking "man thats so pretty" and the way he claims her for himself that was awesome i cant wait to see dramione babies or whatever this story brings! it is truly totally amazing work man i love dramione stories i always get so reminiscent of my own relationships its just so touching and fluffy its obvious draco loves her and then there's the dominate draco and man thats awesome to. Ass eating isnt really a fantasy for me but (ahahaha)it still seemed highly erotic in this. my favorite part the sex thing (id like to try) is where he has her stand in front of the mirror and do everything he tells her to oh man talk about total control what an awesome idea the chapter was packed with them such good work cant wait to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:::pulling my hand out of my knickers and wiping them off so I can type:::: was that nasty? oh who cares, this is like knicker wetting type of smut! All I really can think of to say is Guuuuuh!!! and thanks for the orgasm!

Seriously, I know I told you this on GE but this was just way over expectations and just so Draco! Hermione is a lucky heffa and I hope she doesn't wake up the next morning and regret it or try to bolt. LOL. I'm sure Draco will reel her in if she does. Loved the way you give insight into what she's going through, and I love Draco's openness...how refreshing is that???

Classic stuff here Ilke, you should be very proud. : )))))
person sugypunk
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I unfortunately missed the last update, but got to enjoy two chapters in one night. And I must say, this last chapter was very HOT! I don't know if it was meant to be funny, but I laughed my ass off at the way Draco marked her as his property. Sounds like something the character would do. lol. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens 'the morning after'! Keep up the great work!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*EAR SPLITTING SQUEE* OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD. *explodes into a pile of sparkly confetti* well. ahem. that was really amazing. best draco/hermione action i have ever read. hands down. and believe me when i say that, i have read a lot. i am a stay at home mom, and i read lots and lots of HP, and Naruto smut. so, thank you. ^.^
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was freaking amazing. By far one of the best sex scenes i've ever read FANTASTIC JOB!! ^_^ really really looking forward to the next chapter .
person OCHIT
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!! THE BEST SEX SCENE I'VE EVER READ! SO INTENSE AND PASSIONATE I COULD FEEL IT! MORE!!!!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just wow!

That was amazing, I was in no way disappointed at all. :-) It was so hot, and beautiful, so much emotion. I just love it when Draco's so far gone like that, and you've captured it so well. I love the way he dominated her, and she loved every second of it. Her journey from uneasiness and embarassment into unbridled passion was perfect!

Wonderful job! I can't wait to see the "aftermath!" Iced tea for me today! Very iced.

schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! I have been waiting for that scene for ages!!!!
That was.... AWESOME!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

!!

Lol. Seriously, that was one of the best sex scenes ever. Is it too early to say 'I love you'? Cuz, at this moment, I totally do. :)
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god.
That was fucking fabulous!
I love it.
You're awesome.
Absolutely awesome.

Wow....