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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

person Claire
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, oh my god, oh my god oh my god. This ist really the fucking BEST story i've ever found. THANK YOU FOR IT!!!
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
we need updates :)
i love this story.. you're amazing!!
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finished the trailer for your amazing story. Although it can never do your amazing story justice, I hope you like it. I tried to make it as sensual as I could.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=mEYu7N7Vrzs
person smartgirl13w
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once I finish reading this story, up til your last post, I plan on mentioning it in my blog Lovesdramione over at Blogger...
Alright, so this story is wonderful. I'm on chap19 right now, and I can't believe how easily I fell into this story! To think I skipped over it repeatedly because of the name and summary, I was seriously confused as to what it was about and now that I know...ah! The suspense doesn't bother me at all because instead of teasing us with possible outcomes to soggy situations, you actually let it play out! Like Draco knowing that he shouldn't continue kissing her shoulder but Hey! he's doing it anyways! Stuff like that dulls the ache of suspense. And your descriptions are vivid, piecing in Hogwarts and wizarding topics better than I've ever seen in fanfiction (apart from jk herself). Great, amazing work!
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schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was so great to see the return of this segment, formerly a one-shot. Part of me wishes you had left up the original, just so we could see the evolution from your initial concept, to how that fit into this larger, expanded version. I think it's largely the same, but if my memory serves, there's been some tweaking. Of course, at my age, memory may not be serving. **G And, may I say that I have just been so enthralled with the way you have expanded the story. The backstory you have created for that original one-shot is absolutely compelling. Of course, I'm also curious as to whether anything is going to change from the open ending of the original piece. I noticed we didn't get quite to that point, here. So, I'm wondering if you are going to give us the same seeming conflict, hopefully with a resolution this time, or if you are going to give us a different development. Either way, I'm really looking forward to reading more. Good job.
person Himitsu
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story~ I've been following for awhile and I check everyday for THIS story. I love your writing style and this latest chapter...They're both so wonderfully vulnerable that in between the carnal love making, they are downright sweet with each other. Harhar.

I hate/love the way you always leave us poor readers hanging. :D
person Julia
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i love this story!! I love your portrayal of Draco.. I'm so hooked, i swear i'm checking for update daily :)
person demonmiko
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this must be the best sex scene i have ever read. other writers either include too much with vulgarity and immature details or not enough at all, but this one was sophisticated yet raw. i loved it.

i was looking at your recommended stories list hoping to find some other stories as good as this one. some look interesting, buti was wondering what cg was?

anyway, awesome chapter. this and a wonderful caricature of intimacy are competing for my favorite D/H fic. right now, you're a bit in the lead. keep it up.
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously *loving* this story....... I read it when, this chapter was posted as a oneshot on CG, and then you started writing it as a full story. Great job, great story!!! Can't wait to see what happens!