rate_review Reviews

I've loved reading this story. The way you write really makes it 'real'. Like you're there in between them. [Or wish you were ;>] I've chased my son out of my room when I see there's a new chapter up. If interrupted, I can get downright violent when I'm reading something I enjoy. And I am enjoying this. Can't wait for the next installment.

I've been reading this for a very long time( I'm one of the guilty lurkers) and I'm always enthralled with each chapter.
You have an amazing way with words, that I most definitely envy. Your ability to convey their emotions is amazing.

I find a lot of Draco/Hermione stories rush them into something(I've even been guilty of it), but your transition was calculated and perfect. Not to mention a complete surprise.

I wanted to review last chapter and let you know how I really cherish this fic. It's my favorite. I promise to review from now on. You definitely deserve them.

Waiting patiently for Draco to gain his footing and for your next update.

~dM.

I can't tell you how much I adore this story. I compulsively check Adultfanfiction to see if you've updated.... and trust me when I say that there are very few fics that I do that with! I crave your updates! I've even gone back and reread chapters to keep myself from going crazy. I've only ever done that with Sage's fics (which are my favorite fics of all time easily).... so this story is well on it's way to being one of those favs, too. This last chapter was so sad. Although I understand completely why you had to do it (and it will make the story much better in the long run), it was just torture to read. There has been all this tension all this ache on Draco's part, and finally there was sweet blissful relief in the chapter, only for that ache to come back doubly so. Because now that he's had her... it will be twice as hard to stay away. And it will be twice as hard for me not to obsessively check for updates.

Wonderful job!

This chapter again was amazing!!!! Keep it up!

Well I think she took one look into his eyes and realised he was capable of reciprocating feelings that she has for him and that's what has her freaked. She's just realised that it wasn't just sex and that it meant more than that for both of them and she had nothing to prepare herself for the emotions that hit her. Draco might well know what to do with their bodies (yes indeed, thank goodness for fanficdom) but he has a lot of growing up to do in his head as does Hermione and I look forward to seeing them make that journey together. That's my take and I'm sticking to it!! LOL (unless another chapter tells me otherwise). ;) Oh and isn't he a confused angry young man now. He doens't know how to deal with his heart either. Loved it!!

Congrats on the nomination!!! I am so happy for you!! You completely, totally, absolutely, (enough adjectives? lol) deserve it. I have to say again that I love your story. You really are amazing, and an inspiration, at least to me. I haven't posted anything on this site, but I have posted on another site, and if I may say, you intimidate me. ^_^ I check obsessively every day, at least 3 times a day for an update. I am patient, but I must say, I am getting antsy for my fix. I am not one to talk about updating expediantly though, I have many stories I am behind on. ^_^ And I have solved the mystery of how I found your story, from SoftObsidian, is it? I was reading one of her stories, and since she reccomended it, and I liked her stuff, I thought I'd check you out. And I am oh so glad I did. kisses!! And thank you for sharing your story with us!! XXOO

OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! I have to say first off the I am LOVING this story! And I am loving the dirty talk as well. You are a very good writer. The chapter you wrote when Draco was "teaching" her to say naughty words was the best one I had read until this one. I would have to agree with your other reviewers that is one of the BEST sex scenes I have read so far! GREAT job!! I can't wait for more!!
*OK time to go change my knickers now*

You didn't write tamale cookies in the fic xD you wrote that about me calling you nena hahaha:P

Man the longest freakin kink fic I have ever read in the history of D/H or any other fic period.

I can't wait for the next instalment XDDDDDDD

keep up the good work <33333333333333333333

That was very hot! It gets better and better as the story goes along. I have one question though. In your warnings you had put BDSM and Ds. Is that something that they're going to explore more, or is Draco telling Hermione what to do as far as it's going to go? That's why I started reading your story, but if Ds doesn't get added to a greater extent, I'm still going to keep reading. I love it.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
I was so excited I came back from weeks without internet and BAM!!! Hermione's being smexed up by Draco, YAY!!! It was such an awesome chapter, brilliant brilliant brilliant, as always!
And no, I agree, not having sweet things whispered to her surely did her no harm.
Can't wait for what comes next, but for now, a cold shower is in order, lol.

~MidnighTemptation.