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Hrmm, I did quite like this chapter, 'cept for the shortness.
I'm very glad that Draco's finally admitted his love, and although I don't like them having the unhappiness with each other, it's more life-like that way, and works out well.
Wheee, I'm all excited for the weekly update, lol.



xxo

Oh, how perfect! I think the aftermath is just so realistically done. Both lost in their regrets, his anguish that she doesn't love him back (in his own head anyway, it's there, they just haven't realized it yet), her realizing she's not a virgin anymore. I think so many of us have those same or very similar thoughts after such a momentous event. Though I have to say, my anguish for Draco is more intense than for Hermione at this point, not that I don't feel deeply for her and what she's trying to sort out, but Draco....man, it's got to be so hard for him to feel such vulnerability. I just can't wait to see how you bring these two around, and clear the air. You do such a wonderful job with emotions, you're certainly pulling at all of mine.

Very nicely done, I love it!

Told you how I feel about this wonderful Chapter on GE, but just dropping more love here. I'm just gonna follow you around like a fangirl as long as you continue writing this....it's that good. Anyhow, I do have something different to say this time. lol. Whenever a piece of writing sucks me in like this, it forces me to reflect on why. And I think I figured it out. It think it's amazing how you tapped in the psyche of Draco, a dude, but you didn't emasculate him. What I'm saying is that you're really good at capturing the human experience without gendering it. It's really a special gift that only the best authors can pull off. It always surprises me when a male author writes a really good female character...I think it's a bit easier for women to write men because they are the default in our society, but where female authors usually trip up is showing vulnerability and love without making the guy sound melodramatic, like something that stepped out of a fantasy (I'm guilty of this ::shrug::), or stripping away his raw masculinity. I know, all of this can be debated, but that's just how I feel about the way you've written Draco. Like I said before, I've never identified with him like this, and it's a bit jarring to feel so aligned to his character instead of Hermione's. I absolutely love it though, and thank you for the new experience. Whenever you update, I'll be happy, so don't rush it, you're creating a classic here!

Ok; I remember this chapter as the second chapter when you had originally posted on CG. Great chapter!!! So can't wait to see what happens...

That was amazing! I'm not sure I've read a better sex scene anywhere! Draco was perfect, in and out of control - perfect! I can't wait to move on to the next chapter.

NOOOOOOOO!!!! I get why you did it, but that didn't make it easier to read. Please don't let him give up. He does have more to prove to her - she deserves it. Too many stories gloss over his treatment of her over the years. BUT, I hope things aren't bad for long. I'm a softie and love a happy ending... will I get one? Pretty please?

Do I really need to reiterate just *how* mind-numbingly awesome the last chapter was? Yes? It was very, very, very, very, very...(goes on for an indefinite period of time)...mind-numbingly awesome. Lol. I just loved the intensity of Draco's emotions, so needless to say, this chapter had me going 'Wtf, Hermione...how *could* you not feel something for him?!' And I feel terrible for Draco, too. Ah well, can't wait to read more, though ! Cheers

THe more i read this story the more i love it! Your sex chapter was unblivable! it was so good! i almost felt like i actualy was granger literaly being fucked by draco.... So cool!
Anyway I was sacred that the story would be ruined be the "after sex chapters" but you'r so good you avoided it all and made it so much more interesting... I really can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so ecxited to read how the two of theme are gonna work things out!
Please please please spare my mental health! and update asap!
the wait is driving me crazy...( In case you havent notice or read it alredy...)

Your's always Sheryne

Wow! Just wow! I can't believe i haven't read this story before - it's amazing!! I love your writing style & the way you portray Hermione and Draco is beautiful. But at this point i feel really sorry for Draco :( Please please update again soon :)

Loved the chapter!! Can't wait to read more, as always, and I have posted two stories on here now, since you asked so nicely. I feel so naked, and exposed, and vulnerable. Eep. This is different than the baby site I posted on. Be gentle!! I will be waiting. ^.^ *refreshes screen to check for another chapter*