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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

person ichiruki
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@23 ichi say one word with bit of punctuation.....WOW!

ichi be speechless now, she only keep thinking....WOW!

person kazfeist
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Draco! Looking forward to all the rest of the chapters, hon! :D
person Tootsie
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm worry about Draco very much maybe I understand his feeling so far. And I don't sure about Hermione what she will doing next? Yes I know she love Draco too . After naked&share desire with the man It's made her shock or something. But please you two please understand each other soon..Love -- Tootsie/ticcia =D
person ichiruki
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So exciting to hear about your noms, and I loved Breenieweenie's trailer for this fic too! She does such excellent work doesn't she, I need to find out what my log in info for youtube was, and then go sign in to comment there. LOL!

Ok, *rubs hands together all evil-like* so what is he going to do??? Hmmm my brain is swimming with possible "naughty, naughtier, and naughtiest" type options. And poor innocent naive Hermione, she's really not going to see it coming. Pun not intended, but now that's it written who knows, it could prophetic? *snickers* If only I could see the future, but then it wouldn't be nearly as fun as imagining the possibilities.

And poor stupid (if not more likely "emotional damaged goods") Draco, he needs to find his voice and just say all the things he should have said that night to let the poor chit know what he was really thinking and feeling about her, I mean, she's not a mind reader, unlike certain other Dark Wizards (LMAO!). Sure she's bright, but emotionally, eh, she's not a Ravenclaw in the social skills department. And finding yourself shagged senseless, literally, it's not like she was going to become a Miss Wordy-Word Smith after that.

"Find your sack, dude!" That's what I was left thinking when I could finally think again, lol. Did I mention the WOW-tastic-ness of that last chapter? Ok, that said, feel a delicious "yikes" coming on for Hermione. I think he is SO going to take her by surprise, as she kind of comes off not knowing what to do next, as if she's almost a little lost on how to feel now. The boy is so hot and cold with the way he shows his feelings. Again with the "Find your sack, dude" and then the "speak your mind" feelings this chapter leaves me with. And that obviously is not just going to happen overnight. So again with the "can't wait to see what happens next" part of this review!

ichi-you know you are making me want to write a smut drabble, LOL! And you should know, I haven't felt like writing in over a month! ;) Gods. I'm still thinking about your sex chapter.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly this is just the begining of much more between this two lovers.. And I intend to keep reading post soon..
person Himitsu
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You put quite the tear in my eye, my dear. As much as I'd love the happy morning after, I am endlessly grateful for it making it...difficult for the two of them. I've never seen this kind of depth in a Draco/Hermione fic and the way they act breaks the mold for who they are, giving them new dimensions to ponder...It makes it all the easier to feel what they do. I am just sitting on pins and needles waiting for more...Even if you're going to rend my heart (and possibly poor Draco's) in two!
person the bells
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous. I love Hermione, but the girl's being stupid right now. And I hate to see how hurt Draco is...though some karmic retribution was in order for his past dismissals of his lovers, I'm sure. I really hope this all works out in the end. And imagine the grudge sex they can have in the meantime! *fans cheeks*
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So this chapter was a bit sad, but I must say it is always a good read when there is a bit of angst right after an amazing smut scene. You are so unbelievably talented and are just incredible. It was my honor to make you a trailer because this has to be one of the best dramione fics I have ever read. You capture their emotions so well, I can imagine everything and it's like I'm feeling it too.

Now, I know you said that you would be willing to write me a fic as a thank you gift, all you need is a prompt. I honestly don't think you need to because this story is just so wow and it inspired me to make the trailer. But (because I am giddy that someone as talented as you would want to write little ol' me a fic)if you really feel the need to thank me in some way and really want to write a fic I'll give you some ideas and let you choose and do it however you want.

I'm a total cliche fan girl. I can't help it and I honestly don't think I want too, these cliches are just too good even if they have been done fifty billion times... I think you could choose one and make it way better. My first and most favorite is the whole Draco veela fic. I don't care if they are in school or in their early twenties or however, but for some reason I love the whole one person for someone and a possessive Draco is totally hot. Also, if he is a veela, possessive dark Draco... even better. My second favorite (if you haven't guessed) is the whole marriage law fic. I have no idea why but it really appeals to me. Once again it doesn't matter if they are in school or out of it.. or if Draco hates Hermione or if he has been secretly in love with her. Either way is fine with me. My third favorite is the whole Voldemort wins (either Draco get's hermione as a prize or Draco helps Voldemort win so he can claim Hermione), but again.. a very dark, obsessive Draco. Also, it isn't required, but for some reason (probably because I've only ever been with my husband and I'm a total romantic), but I like the whole Hermione is a virgin thing... which you have done so perfectly in Claiming Hermione. The only thing I ask is that you have one or more sex scenes cause you are brilliant at it and I'm a total smut lover. (I know I kinda got carried away with ideas... sorry).

Once again, you really don't have to write me a fic and I do not want you to feel obligated in any way at all. I made you a trailer for your fic because I adore it and I wanted to, not expecting anything in return. I think you are so talented and I was happy to do it. You are such a wonderful, magnificent writer (i really need to find more adjectives to describe how bloody fantastic you are) and thank you so much for even writing this story. I can't wait to read more!

Breenie!
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my word firstly, thanks for the nod, and like does not describe what I feel for this story especially chap23, I think I am tryin to committ it to memory the amount of depraved times that I have re-read it. Secondly I cant believe hermione get on like that I mean is she so shallow in this all of a sudden why has she so suddenly shut down? POOR POOR Draco, sigh, you better fix this quick cause I cant take all that hippogriff exploding tension and dance again, Poor draco he has his heart ripped out of his chest. Fix this please and soon. Sigh, keep up the brilliant work and u r a bloody genius, so update soon plzzzzzzzzzzz.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant tell you how excited i was when i saw the new chapter up! i srsly think i jumped out of my seat ^_^ great chapter btw. Im really really really really looking forward to the next one