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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fabulously giddy chapter!!! Can't wait to see what develops after the snowball fight....
person jeevi
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg
i just read this story in one go and i absolutely love it
it's fabulous
i love everything about it
i finished it half an hour ago and i've checked a million times just in case you updated
i love it :)
you are brilliant
i can't wait for the rest!
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me? Peeking? (flutters eyelashes and tries to look innocent). I don't know what you mean. (Thank you Weasley Home School Legimency Lessons). LMAO

But seriously, her heart is in such a good place, isn't it? And she tried so hard to share it with Draco and show him that someone cared about him and that he wasn't alone at Christmas. I thought that was so sweet. But the moment I read of the beginnings of a snowball fight, I knew where it was going and that Hermione was going down. Actually, they both did. (laughs at own pathetic attempt at humour) and then you had to bloody stop it just as things were getting extra good. I think I need to owl the Weasley twins' shop for book two. ;) :)
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I keep checking to see if you have updated this story...a sure sign that I am hooked!
I hope that you update soon. Keep up the excellent writing.
person Rainaangel
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No no no! How could you leave it there!?! ;) Really great (and i mean GREAT!) chapter though - i loved it. Draco and Hermione were so sweet together. Thank you so so much for updating - loves you :)
person Tootsie
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi this chapter make me smile again =D God! I love Hermione, finally she notice how Draco important to her. I want more more & waiting you update. *big hug* - ticcia/tootsie
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hip hip HURRAY!!! HIP HIP HURRAY!!!! Checking obsessively for updates, definately has it's benefits, other than the obvious draw back of arthritis in my right index finger, from compulsive mouse clicking.^.^ I LOVED the new chappie. It was beautifully written, as always. I love seeing a smitten Draco, it's adorable. And why must Hermione always be so damned sensible? Where is that Gryffindor courage woman? Anyways, I love that Hermione thought about Draco on Christmas, and decided to take him to Hogsmeade. And I LOVED the snowball fight. I adore snow, even though I have never seen a sizeable ammount, and have always wanted to have a snowball fight. ^.^

I am glad you read my other chapters. I went back and fixed all the gramatical errors. They were self-insertion, (obviously) from another site, and I was horrified at all the errors. HA HA at looking them up on Wiki and worrying about being hooked. My 3 weakness's are Naruto, Harry Potter, and Pirates of the Caribbean, and House...... so I guess that makes four then. I am working on 2 "real" stories if you were interested. One of them is a House fic *blushes* and to my eternal embarassment, the other is about *blushes 50 shades of red* a celebrity. I won't say who. You can find out if/when you are bored. Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing. You have made a fangirl so happy!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my thanks for the onsite reply, and u caught me redhanded with the hit counter...lol, cause I dont think u realize how high in my mind the singular chapter is now ranked, that just has to be the best smut/lemon I have ever read, and hope u get juicier with each meeting. Anyway onto this new chappy, I love that its long and oh atleast its a change in temperature (literally) for them, and their relationship as she decided to not avoid him, and poor draco he is absolutely in love with the girl, and u made a little worried with your statement of "fixing" things will take a long time, ARGHHH!!!, sigh, u know very well what kind of torture u r gonna put your avid readers through, u r going to make us beg and plead eventually arent u? Anyway that last bit in the chapter where things were getting hot enough to melt the snow around them, i HOPE THEY FOLLOW THROUGH, and hermione doesn't turn frigid again, I could understand that she is confused and worried about everything, but she knows deep down its right and if she has so much trust in him, and he wants her love, whats wrong with her? maybe i am missing something by just watching her as the typical overthinking hermione that turns on and off when its convienant to her, but she is totally different now than before the sex, and she doesn't see that, poor naivety. Brilliant, brilliant job, and keep the updates coming.
person kazfeist
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel weird, now. ;) It's nice seeing what I've suggested show up in print, though. :D On the the rest of the story!
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how dare you stop there!! awesome post btw, really really really looking forward to the next one.