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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. You need to write more. Now. :)
Seriously, you can't leave us hanging like this. lol
Seriously, you can't leave us hanging like this. lol
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I did check out the smutastic awards and i was like a little child on christmas morning. fantastic! I feel for Draco and i completely love this passion between them and their vulnerability towards each other. amazing!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes...Damn it!!! I've been reading along, enjoying this - always happy for an update. The tension at the end of that chapter was SO palpable! Good job!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter! love the way you wrote in detail every thoughts and feelings that the two felt. And i felt them, too very strongly!!!! Cant wait for the next one!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Book 2 is where I get to know what's going on with the story without having to deal with these darn cliffies. And I'm sure I can convince the twins (Fred lives on in my head) to give me a discount. ;) LMAO And I think that if you continue to write such wonderful chapters then I will happily endeavour to keep you laughing. Do we have an accord? :)
Arghhhh, I want to shake the pair of them and tell them to snap out of whatever's going on in their heads and just get on with it. I guess I forget sometimes that one thinks of things differently as an adult then one does as a teen yet to experience and understand things better. She shouldn't be jealous of his experiences, that's part of the reason she approached him in the first place. And he should have realised that she wanted to be someone special to him even if she hasn't realised it herself yet. LOL I'm being too hard on them, I know BUT arghhhhhhh just the same. LOL And why does desire rear it's naughty head at the most inconvenient times? On the steps to Dumbledore's office indeed!!!
Arghhhh, I want to shake the pair of them and tell them to snap out of whatever's going on in their heads and just get on with it. I guess I forget sometimes that one thinks of things differently as an adult then one does as a teen yet to experience and understand things better. She shouldn't be jealous of his experiences, that's part of the reason she approached him in the first place. And he should have realised that she wanted to be someone special to him even if she hasn't realised it herself yet. LOL I'm being too hard on them, I know BUT arghhhhhhh just the same. LOL And why does desire rear it's naughty head at the most inconvenient times? On the steps to Dumbledore's office indeed!!!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. i love how they're falling in love but fighting it. I can't wait to see love win. :D
Great work!
Great work!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1
Oh wow, that was an emotional beginning. Poor Draco losing both his parents like that and finding out his father was a monster. I feel for him. Obviously Hermione does too. I am looking forward to seeing what happens. Draco may say this changes nothing, but they both will have it seared into their memory from now on. They have both looked past the fa
Oh wow, that was an emotional beginning. Poor Draco losing both his parents like that and finding out his father was a monster. I feel for him. Obviously Hermione does too. I am looking forward to seeing what happens. Draco may say this changes nothing, but they both will have it seared into their memory from now on. They have both looked past the fa
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright, this is Smartgirl13w. Just changed my name. Great story still!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read a lot of Dramione stuff, but I can honestly say that this is my all time favorite. The first chapter is just so powerful, I can't help but get attached to your Draco. Ch 23 is beautifully written, and really still stays with the story. Often authors can't make the transition to smut from writing everything else and keep the flow of the story, but I think you did a great job. Also, your characterizations are perfect. I love love love your writing and I am a huge fan of this story and can't wait to see more. :)