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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 was the hottest thing i ever read in a dramione!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay seriously I'm all flushed from that last bit. *Fans self* Whew. More please!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really had me on the staircase part. i finally notice i had to exhale when it ended. ohh i so want them to hurry up nd get it over with, but i also love the waiting and inticipating. u really nailed this chapt.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
Wow, I love all these little details you add, like the visceral description of Draco remembering Hermione holding him and the beautiful description of the handkerchief Poor Draco has no one really that cares about him, even Pansy doesn
Wow, I love all these little details you add, like the visceral description of Draco remembering Hermione holding him and the beautiful description of the handkerchief Poor Draco has no one really that cares about him, even Pansy doesn
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job! I've had a very long day, and this was the perfect thing to end it with!!! Well... technically, it's already tomorrow, but you get the picture. As much as I want them to get on with it already, wonderful job working them out of the little position at the beginning of this chapter. It's so nice having them alone now for the holidays.... I wonder how the dynamics will change when everyone comes back from break?
Absolutely fabulous end there! Goodness, I'm dying for more!
*will continue to check obsessively*
Absolutely fabulous end there! Goodness, I'm dying for more!
*will continue to check obsessively*
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:)
I get very excited when I see you've updated
I actually jumped up and down in my seat, clapping my hands this time, haha
I love how you're expressing Draco's feelings, he knows he shouldn't but he can't stay away. That little bit on the staircase was golden, they both wanted it. But also frustrating, because straight after it ended, lol
I can't wait until the next chapter!
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I get very excited when I see you've updated
I actually jumped up and down in my seat, clapping my hands this time, haha
I love how you're expressing Draco's feelings, he knows he shouldn't but he can't stay away. That little bit on the staircase was golden, they both wanted it. But also frustrating, because straight after it ended, lol
I can't wait until the next chapter!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yippee!! I'm so so glad you updated - i think this is the best Hermione/Draco story that i've ever read - seriously! i ADORE this story - i can't believe it took me this long to come across it :) As for this chapter i just love how you described the tension between the two & how it's slowly driving them both crazy with desire *laughs evilly* ;) Anyway please please update again soon :) Loves you,
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It did hurt. And it was wonderful.
oh my goodness ~sighs~ that was such a beautiful line i was smiling the whole time i was reading this chapter. to freakin awesome i love how well their written i mean that is exactly what Hermione would do and honestly that's how I always pictured Draco (the only sleeping with six people part) in my head draco and hermione look different emma is okay and tom's really not my taste (sorry to offended anyone) but in my head picturing my dramione doing these things oh man it is awseome and it makes me smile and it is great!!!!!!
oh my goodness ~sighs~ that was such a beautiful line i was smiling the whole time i was reading this chapter. to freakin awesome i love how well their written i mean that is exactly what Hermione would do and honestly that's how I always pictured Draco (the only sleeping with six people part) in my head draco and hermione look different emma is okay and tom's really not my taste (sorry to offended anyone) but in my head picturing my dramione doing these things oh man it is awseome and it makes me smile and it is great!!!!!!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As expected the hunting begins and it is exquisite.. Lourdes
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't you love mushy moments? *sigh* I loves it too!!!
OKAY that is uber uber super totally cute, even though you're right it didn't make any sense. But in it's nonsensical state, it was utterly romantic. My fiancee isn't romantic at all. He doesn't know how to pick up on romantic moments, and certainly doesn't know how to create them. And he has tried really hard. Which in and of itself, is sweet enough to mush me. But this Valentine's Day he nailed it. We're both very poor, being in school at the time, and decided to do something low key, and not exchange gifts. So I was feeling pretty low, never having actually had a movie moment v-day before, when he walks out of our bedroom calling my name. So I go to him, and on our door is a post-it that says '51 reason why I love you', and I'm totally confused. But then he opens the door, and every single one of our walls is littered in post-its, all with reasons why he loves me. I totally cried. It was hands down, the flat out most beautiful thing anyone has ever done for me. Needless to say I got my movie moment Valentines Day. haha
Anyways enough with my mushies, onto my review.
Wow...wow. I LOVED the internal struggle your showing in Hermione. It's just so accurate. When you think a guy is bad for you, you don't want to relent, and you literally go through that inner turmoil. It was fabulous. Although I must admit, even though I love that she won't give in and that this will go slow, it's sad knowing and seeing the signs that she is falling in love with him and having her play it off as sexual. It kind of makes my heart break, because with that reasoning I know somewhere down the line she'll break Draco's heart. Draco is a character desperate for love, unconditional love. With his Mother gone, he's lost that, and with Hermione he thinks he'll never have it. So if she relents sexually, and keeps this friendship act up, his need will grow and he'll mistake it all. Even the most intelligent people fall victim to the game of love.
However, though I say it's sad now, I know if it does indeed go that way it will be amazing for the story.
I think what I love most about your story, besides your ability to display emotions so brilliantly, is that in most fan fics everyone had Hermione fall first. Everyone always believes it will be Draco who denies it longer, who won't realize it. In yours, its the opposite. I love it!
I always believed it would be this way. Throughout all the HP books, you can tell that Draco is the way he is because of how he grew up, because of the lack of affection and love, and you can tell how he desperately seeks it through his attention from his peers. I always thought that he would be the one to fall prey to loves whims first.
Hermione is someone who would never see herself falling in love with the 'bad boy'. She thinks herself too practical and too intelligent to fall for that commonly known syndrome of "I can save the bad boy" she'd never allow herself to believe the love she does have for him right away. Just so you know, I think you did it right. haha
Oh Oh Oh!!! I would LOVEEEEE if you threw in a rainy scene. I would wait chapters upon chapters for it. haha Oh I hope you do. I would be on cloud 9 if there was a rainy scene. And then the mush would start all over again.
You know...rainy scenes are always the scenes where there's a climax and the person who see's clearly and who is knowingly in love gives the other an ultimatum, or makes them see clearly.
It totally happened that way in my relationship.
I think a rainy scene would be PERFECT!!! haha.
I eagerly await the next installment.
'Till next time. :)
OKAY that is uber uber super totally cute, even though you're right it didn't make any sense. But in it's nonsensical state, it was utterly romantic. My fiancee isn't romantic at all. He doesn't know how to pick up on romantic moments, and certainly doesn't know how to create them. And he has tried really hard. Which in and of itself, is sweet enough to mush me. But this Valentine's Day he nailed it. We're both very poor, being in school at the time, and decided to do something low key, and not exchange gifts. So I was feeling pretty low, never having actually had a movie moment v-day before, when he walks out of our bedroom calling my name. So I go to him, and on our door is a post-it that says '51 reason why I love you', and I'm totally confused. But then he opens the door, and every single one of our walls is littered in post-its, all with reasons why he loves me. I totally cried. It was hands down, the flat out most beautiful thing anyone has ever done for me. Needless to say I got my movie moment Valentines Day. haha
Anyways enough with my mushies, onto my review.
Wow...wow. I LOVED the internal struggle your showing in Hermione. It's just so accurate. When you think a guy is bad for you, you don't want to relent, and you literally go through that inner turmoil. It was fabulous. Although I must admit, even though I love that she won't give in and that this will go slow, it's sad knowing and seeing the signs that she is falling in love with him and having her play it off as sexual. It kind of makes my heart break, because with that reasoning I know somewhere down the line she'll break Draco's heart. Draco is a character desperate for love, unconditional love. With his Mother gone, he's lost that, and with Hermione he thinks he'll never have it. So if she relents sexually, and keeps this friendship act up, his need will grow and he'll mistake it all. Even the most intelligent people fall victim to the game of love.
However, though I say it's sad now, I know if it does indeed go that way it will be amazing for the story.
I think what I love most about your story, besides your ability to display emotions so brilliantly, is that in most fan fics everyone had Hermione fall first. Everyone always believes it will be Draco who denies it longer, who won't realize it. In yours, its the opposite. I love it!
I always believed it would be this way. Throughout all the HP books, you can tell that Draco is the way he is because of how he grew up, because of the lack of affection and love, and you can tell how he desperately seeks it through his attention from his peers. I always thought that he would be the one to fall prey to loves whims first.
Hermione is someone who would never see herself falling in love with the 'bad boy'. She thinks herself too practical and too intelligent to fall for that commonly known syndrome of "I can save the bad boy" she'd never allow herself to believe the love she does have for him right away. Just so you know, I think you did it right. haha
Oh Oh Oh!!! I would LOVEEEEE if you threw in a rainy scene. I would wait chapters upon chapters for it. haha Oh I hope you do. I would be on cloud 9 if there was a rainy scene. And then the mush would start all over again.
You know...rainy scenes are always the scenes where there's a climax and the person who see's clearly and who is knowingly in love gives the other an ultimatum, or makes them see clearly.
It totally happened that way in my relationship.
I think a rainy scene would be PERFECT!!! haha.
I eagerly await the next installment.
'Till next time. :)