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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't take it too personally. I always have love/hate relationships with incomplete stories that I really, really love. I mean, they're so good but they're not done! And then I have to wait! Luckily, you never make us wait long so its a lot more love than hate.
This was a brilliant chapter that evoked the same reaction as last time. Only this time, I calmed myself down before I wrote the review.
This was a brilliant chapter that evoked the same reaction as last time. Only this time, I calmed myself down before I wrote the review.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
I don
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking phenomonal. God I love it.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I haven't been lurking, I swear! I didn't have internet for a month and a half but I have it now and I wanted to read all these beautiful chapter before I reviewed.
Wow! Talk about a first time. I wish my first time was like that . . . Given the characters and circumstances, you wrote it so beautifully and eloquently. I love what you have done with these characters. This is such a realistic fanfic that it just blows my mind and makes me love it so much. I was smiling through the entire snowball scene, then to be able to actually feel the change in attitude and tone, I was there. It worked. I love how you handled the moment and morning after. That is perfect. These two are so not ready to declare undying love.
Yay for this being a long one!!
Wow! Talk about a first time. I wish my first time was like that . . . Given the characters and circumstances, you wrote it so beautifully and eloquently. I love what you have done with these characters. This is such a realistic fanfic that it just blows my mind and makes me love it so much. I was smiling through the entire snowball scene, then to be able to actually feel the change in attitude and tone, I was there. It worked. I love how you handled the moment and morning after. That is perfect. These two are so not ready to declare undying love.
Yay for this being a long one!!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Yes Hermione is a serious girl. She is ambitious and hardworking. Tends to keep to herself, away from the madding crowd. She doesn
Yes Hermione is a serious girl. She is ambitious and hardworking. Tends to keep to herself, away from the madding crowd. She doesn
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just finished reading ch.23 it was so hot!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great update, as usual, you manage to convey such strong, raw emotions in both of them. The whole part at the beginning, the tension before and after the "moment" was so touching. And Christmas was just beautiful, Draco missing his mother was so sad, but his reaction to Hermione giving him his gift was incredibly moving, hell that whole bit just made me sigh. And that bit at the end on the stairs...damn, talk about bad timing! Damn, you're good at doing that. LOL! I loved it all!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally! two days! i was obsessed with this story.
i really liked how you portrayed harry, in a lot of stories he goes ballistic when finds out about draco and hermione, this harry is more mature and can see the things he have before him!
i really liked how you portrayed harry, in a lot of stories he goes ballistic when finds out about draco and hermione, this harry is more mature and can see the things he have before him!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! the staircase too short!!
When I read,I hold my breath all time! Want they touch each other in everywhere.
And yeah so glad (^_^ Draco know Hermione want him. They want the same thing and I want too hahaha.
Can
When I read,I hold my breath all time! Want they touch each other in everywhere.
And yeah so glad (^_^ Draco know Hermione want him. They want the same thing and I want too hahaha.
Can
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*clears throat*...sigh...shakes head, you evil, evil person u, u, yeah i am sure photoshop can help depict my sentiments, and as for the warning tags being for us and not the characters, *screams like a banshee*, whatever!!! Anyway i hope u do let them give into those tags because Merlin help me, I am salivating at just the thought of hermione in those situations in this particular masterpiece, there wont be anything else like it. But u vile, loathsome, evil, little.....u are gonna pile so much tension again into our bodies and then release us when the master tells us we can come. BDSM indeed.
Anyway onto the chappy, and lo and behold u turned her into a frigid little bint just as cold as the snow around her in just one sentence, and although she said it and she felt wrong immediately, it still was low especially from her, and the fact that he actually admitted how many girls he slept with and who they were just thumped me into silence, it was a heck off a way to handle her statement. But she changed her attitude towards him right on spot and she was attentive and supportive to him especially about the auror situation, and the gift and her speech was beautiful. And what surprised me was the way her body and mind responded to him from the slight touches and chaste kiss on the cheeks, and he knew it. *clears throat* this was the tension I was refering to,, the swet, sweet tension, the walk to the headmasters office was perilous, and the braking of draco's control when he carressed her on the steps (my heart stopped and I forgot to breathe) and she reponded was explosive and it was just one touch, and they almost forgot where they going, and she didnt answer him, y. The moment she ran through those doors her resistance towards him gonna go back up and its gonna be tougher isn't it....sigh.
I cant say anymore or beg any more and I know my position as u willing slave is i am supposed to beg in order to get rewards from my master, well.....NO...no more beggin, I will die soon, if u dont release me.
UPDATE SOON MASTER
Anyway onto the chappy, and lo and behold u turned her into a frigid little bint just as cold as the snow around her in just one sentence, and although she said it and she felt wrong immediately, it still was low especially from her, and the fact that he actually admitted how many girls he slept with and who they were just thumped me into silence, it was a heck off a way to handle her statement. But she changed her attitude towards him right on spot and she was attentive and supportive to him especially about the auror situation, and the gift and her speech was beautiful. And what surprised me was the way her body and mind responded to him from the slight touches and chaste kiss on the cheeks, and he knew it. *clears throat* this was the tension I was refering to,, the swet, sweet tension, the walk to the headmasters office was perilous, and the braking of draco's control when he carressed her on the steps (my heart stopped and I forgot to breathe) and she reponded was explosive and it was just one touch, and they almost forgot where they going, and she didnt answer him, y. The moment she ran through those doors her resistance towards him gonna go back up and its gonna be tougher isn't it....sigh.
I cant say anymore or beg any more and I know my position as u willing slave is i am supposed to beg in order to get rewards from my master, well.....NO...no more beggin, I will die soon, if u dont release me.
UPDATE SOON MASTER