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I have no idea when the last time you updated this was but I would greatly appreciate it if you continued with it. It sounds like you've been pondering over it for quite a long time and if it's anything like the stories that fill my mind on occasion, you are happy enough to let them live and thrive there in your head. But you can't keep them swirling around in there forever. You have to set them free and let others enjoy them as you have. Please, both take your time and hurry up.
Yours,
Liz

Oh holy crap! I thought you had disappeared! Thank you so much for continuing this story! And please please update! And please please pleasseee don't stop until you finish it! I need to know how this ends! :) Thank you for sharing such an amazing story with me!

I'm a new reader, and I am so glad I chose to browse through the first few chapters. Turns out I'm hooked! Read everything you have up in one night. You are an excellent writer. Please, please continue to post.

Please, please, update soon!! Or at least sometime, when you find the time (I know how difficult that is with kids!)... just please don't leave this story unfinished.

Please update soon! I was so incredibly happy to see you working on this story once more - it is by far the best Draco/Hermione story I've read on AFF.net, and I've read a TON!

I'm really glad you decide to contining this story since it is really great. its my favourite fan fiction and i really hope it goes out strong.
I love the heat of the sex scenes and the passion you have created and i'm already on edge for the next chapter (33)
I study writing at university and you have a talent for it
keep going and keep writing
R.M.Mitchell

I love this story. I really cannot wait for an update. Please update soon.

-WrittersHope

This was pretty great. Good job.

Welcome back! I thought it was a great transitional chapter! I imagine Hermione slowly sinking into the tub behind Draco, comforting him. Also, do you plan to allow Hermoine the opportunity to explore Draco so openly? She's a curious girl and it just seems to me she's love nothing more than to be allowed to examine the ridges and valleys and dips of his muscles and bone structure. It could also be something of a comfort to Draco, who, I'm sure, is feeling very vulnerable and raw and terribly uncertain right now. Switching gears for a second, I want you to know how much I love your version of Harry. He's a great character--an excellent man with keen powers of observation, the ability to truly read people, and he's also very compassionate. I dislike fics that feel his teenage angst will last forever and that it will overshadow his opportunites to grow as a person too. I really look forward to reading more of his interactions with Draco. Perhaps he will be the one to push Draco to confess his feelings for Hermione! I've always seen Harry as Hermoine's big brother. Their relationship is one that I only wish I had with my own big brother. (Fortunately I have something very close with my younger brother, but I digress..) I think he also sees himself as her guardian, of sorts. I think that if he gives his blessing, that goes a long way, ya know? Ron, on the other hand....well, let's hope that if he is mature enough to decide he wants to be a husband at his young age (what are the norms in the Wizarding World, I wonder?), then he is mature enough to see things as they really are. Perhaps Lavender will be able to help with that?
A side comment toward RL...I do hope that RL has been treating you well and that you and your little Luca are happy and healthy! So kind of him to allow you time to write again! Nice to have you back and I look forward to reading more in the future!
Cheers!
SW

I just read all the way through chapter 32. You do a fantastic job of building the suspense and making me commit to reading through the whole thing. The scenes are incredibly hot and I feel myself caring for the characters.
Thanks for writing. I can't wait to see it come to a finish.