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Chapter 7

This was an excellent chapter. I think you wrote it beautifully. I am jealous. LOL
First you start off, building the suspense, giving us an excellent description of the lake and the greenhouse, plus you describe Draco

Hi! I've read the beginnings of your story ever since you posted it on Contraveritas - including the following chapters after the sex scene where there it was a totally different scene. I absolutely love your story then and now. I prefer your post-sex scenes here now, I couldn't stand the tension from the CV version - but their chemistry is still scorching hot!!!

When I read the chapters on CV I was like, "Oh no! They're too tense again! What's it going to take for them to be together? And how long shall I wait for the updates?" It was bittersweet though - I loved it. But in the chapters here, I'm relieved at least that they aren't deliberately avoiding each other but the sexual tension's still there. You can say I'm pretty impatient for them to be togather, haha.

OMG, this story is INCREDIBLE!! I saw it listed on dynonuggets livejournal and decided to give it a read. I was up until 1:30 last night reading this until I could barely focus on the screen any longer! I am so taken in by Draco in this story. You have created such a complex character, I love it! So many beautiful moments I wanted to comment on, but if I do this will be the longest review in history.

This dance that they are doing with each other is so captivating, but please, PLEASE hook them up again soon! I'm dying here!! LMAO!

"Draco dropped his head and shut his eyes, defeated by time and circumstance." this is exactly what i picture his face looking like -.- haha lol. Great chapter as usual...im not too upset that you left me hanging because i know that the next chapter will be fantastic!

Chapter 6

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Chapter 5

I love all your little insights into Draco

Yay gold star! *happy dance*

Two lines in the latest chapter characterize this entire story for me:

"Please kiss me. Kiss me now, quick, before it

Draco is a Stinky McStinkface for not kissing Hermione, while he was laying on top of her among all that beautiful snow. Swoon, at Draco wanting to absorb Hermione into his soul. That is really poetic, and mushy, and romantic. *giggles* I actually teared up during that wonderful part with her gift. I'm such a sap. AND HOLY HOT STAIRWELL ACTION BATMAN!!!! Damn that quick ascent!! Geez, man, I could FEEL Draco's animalistic desire, and Hermione's wanton......ness? LOL.

and yes, you guessed right, but somehow i get the feeling it was less of a guess, and more of a peek? ^.^

XXOO I look forward to more of your fantasmic story, as always!!

I have decide you are a sadist - but I love the story too much!
Great job!